|Reviews for Heal Over|
| Almond chapter 8 . 4/13
This was wonderful. I was surprised by Xavier's actions, but it was written well and in a believable manner. Kudos!
| jessifiy chapter 8 . 2/15
I don't know if you'll ever see this, but i have to let you (and everyone else) know how awesome this fic is and how much i appreciate it. It's both awful and wonderful at the same time. Poor Marie, i'm glad we never really know the full extent of what happened to her, i'm not sure i could bear it. It kind of broke my heart to see Charles as a kinda baddie too but it worked for the story. I just love how awesomely perfect Logan always is with Marie. He's so incredibly gentle and caring and omg i just loved it. I was kinda tense at the start because let's face it, those were some horrible situations but by the end i just got to feeling so relaxed. Logan worked his magic on me too.
God this was just awesome. Sad, but awesome, i'm beyond happy that those two found each other.
| layvba chapter 8 . 12/7/2015
What an amazingly beautiful story.
| Alisha chapter 3 . 10/12/2015
Poor Marie. That Chinese Food Sounds Good. And Charles Is A POS
| paisleymom chapter 8 . 9/17/2014
This last chapter is incredibly well written and really shows the development of the relationship and the change of Logan's character through it. Really well done!
| drakefyre chapter 8 . 6/1/2014
Dunno if you still see reviews, or if you still write at all, but hopefully you'll see this. I found the sexual bits to be disturbing, in that they imply more of Logan taking advantage of Marie than anything else. Either you didn't portray her knowledge of what was going on well enough, or he actually was. In which case I would call his actions rape.
| TeacupHeart chapter 8 . 4/25/2014
I've really enjoyed this story. It's the first one of yours I've read and I look forward to reading more!
| Crash22244 chapter 8 . 4/21/2014
This was an amazing story. This is on of my favorites!
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/22/2014
It was absolutely beautiful. The patience, compassion and love was so real. I will say it again, you have an awesome talent.
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/22/2014
I love the tender nurturing and protective side Logan shows. You did a great job on showing how they bonded and grew closer.
You are an awesome storyteller.
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/22/2014
This is really good
| TheLittleRoguex chapter 8 . 10/29/2013
This fic is soo perfect, would love to have a sequal
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/28/2013
I loved your writing, and loved the wonderful poetic imagery (the simile about a child inadvertently letting go of a balloon - wow!). Some of the imagery got to me in a visceral way, I could feel the angst and sorrow and pain in my gut.
But speaking of visceral: I got seriously creeped out by the last chapter. It smacks of non-consensual sex. I wish you had added a snippet from Rogue's point of view...
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/28/2013
That's all I have to say about this story, fucking beautiful (don't mind my language)
| boothandbones4ever chapter 8 . 3/12/2013