|Reviews for The Moment It Ended|
| Semper Amare chapter 7 . 11/20/2013
I just realized how singularly amazing it would have been if this was longer and told the story of the Tri-Wizard Tournament that happened in Sev's first life. But even without that, it was fantastic.
| Semper Amare chapter 3 . 11/20/2013
He said Always again. Yes.
| Rebecca chapter 7 . 11/5/2013
I loved this story and the moment It began. I wonder why snape and lilly didn't have more children? Also, I think it would have been better of Neville had ended up being the chosen one, not tobias/snape. Could have been more interesting and lead to the second war.
| Anonymous chapter 7 . 5/16/2013
| nade.Elainoir chapter 7 . 1/18/2013
Ngaaaw sooo sweet.. Ahh you did awesome at tying the loose ends :) Thankyou
| myk-myk chapter 7 . 9/28/2012
I love this story. Evan is such a nice young man. He has the best things from Lily and Severus. I am so happy thay Severus told him truth and Evan understood why his father told him this that late. Thank you for this story!
| Saint Snape chapter 7 . 8/29/2012
Lovely story. I don't think Severus would have been given a second chance if he hadn't been worth it. Inside he was a good person even if in his previous life he had done some things wrong. No one is perfect and obviously in his second life he learned from his mistakes.
| Blinko chapter 7 . 7/24/2012
Wow! This (along with the moment it began) are two brilliant fics and woa...just woa. I'm glad that Severus finally got to live the life he wanted.
So heart-warming! You are a very talented writer.
| forTheLoveOfHades chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/28/2012
This book is so good. You previous book (the moment it began) was so brilliant my mum and dad didn't see me for 3 days! I thought it was a great idea getting Tobias kill voldemort! I mean a muggle I would never of thought of that it was just genius! I hope you keep on writing Harry Potter fics they are so good! I can't wait for the next one maybe one about Harry and the gangs lives after Hogwarts. Or you could do about their kids or you could do about the Marauders or maybe about different mixes like dramione and other couples. I read this really good dramione call La Cherise.
Keep on writing
| Gimlifan8 chapter 7 . 5/20/2012
This is just...WOW. That was like reading a book...did you consider ever writing a book? You'd make a damn good writer. I mean, fiction writer.
The only flaw I felt in your series is Severus never settled his life debt to James Potter. I hoped from the beginning that I'd read it in a chapter of your story...but it didn't came. Anyway, amazing plot..and story. And just so you know, I support how Voldemort died. I do think it was completely realistic, and while you have some problems with battle scenes(sometimes the characters, usually Severus, takes to observing during fierce battles), even JK Rowling has battle scene problems. Your story was pretty damn close to perfection.
I'm so going to read your other stories!
| Hazpotsfan chapter 7 . 12/11/2011
That was an amazing story! Sad it wasn't longer though!
| LittleFoxChild chapter 7 . 10/25/2011
what? that's it? ah man.
| Mariposadelaluna chapter 7 . 10/4/2011
This little extra story was sweet and strange. I wonder why they didn't have more children. I understand the resolution found here for Severus and I like the hints of the future in this AU.
| Draco Oblivion chapter 7 . 8/16/2011
It turned out alright and even had a light hearted ending :)