|Reviews for The Moment It Ended|
| Evyheartway chapter 2 . 4/8/2010
I adore the way you wrote Evan, really fantastic!
it's so good to read this sequel to the moment it began. I'm already quite addicted!
| Anachronistic Anglophile chapter 2 . 4/8/2010
Huh! Sounds like the kind of dinner I'd cook. And I liked the bit about 'something awful', because honestly that's part of experimentation.
Evan feeling overshadowed by parents is very realistic, kudos on that.
Looking forward very much to more!
| Mona Ogg chapter 2 . 4/8/2010
Good start of the sequel. I'm looking forward to reading more of this.
| matrice chapter 2 . 4/8/2010
I liked the way you have characterized Evans. A quiet kid, but not a copy of his parents, and someone with something to prove.
| duj chapter 2 . 4/8/2010
I hope Evan takes the news well. He's just at the age to be judgemental.
| Hahukum Konn chapter 2 . 4/7/2010
I look forward to seeing how this breaks out! :) Be an interesting (in the Chinese-curse sense) experience for young Evan.
I'm also happy that you've portrayed a world even more at peace than was possible in Harry's time, since it is definite that Voldemort is gone. :)
| Talon3 chapter 2 . 4/7/2010
The writing is amazing. I love what you are doing for a continus with the proobleems and so forth. The characters are well writen and formed very weell. I alwys wondered how they would turn out in this story.
Is Dumbledore still alive? And you ddid not mention one of my favorite characters, Ron Weassley. But I guess you are goping to be like almost every other author out there and kick him to the curb and so forth. I emean I ddon't like Hermoine but I think that Luna woulld have done much better wwith Ron. Just a thought.
| blue artemis chapter 2 . 4/7/2010
I wonder what Evan will think of the whole thing. He sounds like your typical child who is both proud and determined to distance himself from his parents.
| saiyanwizard chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
I'm happy to see that you've started up a new project! I like where it's going so far. Severus is in a very unique situation that no one else understands, so something like this was bound to happen. Thanks for sharing this with us, and I look forward to your next update!
| thenaughtyfairy chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
It's excellent that you are writing this and glad I still had The Moment it Began on alert! I agree with you and others that Sev would of course still feel haunted by this date. When I read the title I got worried you were going to kill him off! I hope you don't, I was really pleased when Sev and Lily got their happy ending, don't spoil it for me! hee hee - what ever you do I'm sure you will do it well and I can't wait to read it. Got this one one on alert now!
| Evyheartway chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
this is a great start, I am quite thrilled about this new story and looking forward to reading more!
I do agree that Severus is very much the kind of person to find things to be miserable when he could be happy.
| Ponytail Goddess chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
That's too bad, that he can't let it go after all that time. You know, I really do think Evan would be understanding about it. Even if he got angry, he'd get over it fairly fast. He surely loves his father, doesn't he? I guess we'll know more soon.
I'm excited that you're back!
| Dormantness chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Wonderful start! I just can't wait for Evan to know the full story, that is if he will ever know...how suspensful. Please update soon:)
| cartoonartist5 chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
YIPPE! (Sorry - I couldn't help myself!) A sequel to 'The Moment it Began' is exciting! Anyway, I found pleasure reading your first chapter and am looking forward to more! Your Severus is definitely spot on - I can imagine him reacting in this manner over the anniversary of his death.
| Ignus R chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Looking good, and very believable reactions! (personally I think it's telling his son that bothers him, because he knows he'll tell him eventually and that gives him the jitters- needlessly most likely because kids love unconditionally).