Reviews for Unguarded Moment
RubirosaRocks chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
This was a very nice oneshot :D
GothTroubleMaker chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
noce
FlamingRose11 chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
nice. i like Cara because of her direct manner and her toughness. you did great in showing these atributes. nicely done.
Dan chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
That was cool. I like seeing a side of Cara thats a little sweet.
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Cool!
MaryPamPretzels chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
It would be nice if the show included a moment between these two like this. And Cara assuring someone that they are not alone, very interesting.
Lykosdracos chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
Hey, Rat! Not sure if you remember me, but I saw your ff update and figured I'd pop in to say hi! )

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There were times he felt the pain of the knife that killed him slicing through his chest.

- That's an incredible sentence. Intense, deep.

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"I don't foresee anything. I'm just tired."

- haha, that made me smile. You convey his exhaustion, frustration with a hint of humor. Not sure if that was your intent, but nicely done!

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Great job, amazing writing, as always! )