Reviews for Fluttering Pulses
sundes2013 chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
Very well-written, gives me chills...
Kariko Emma chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
Haunting and beautiful piece. So very well written. Well done.

-Caliko
Peridot Tears chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Quiet, serene, though with a touch of darkness. The wording is concise; it moves forward. That last line, though...ugh, love that last line...

PT
time2read chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
OMG you have talent the way you depicted this scene is so breathtaking!
rodeoCLOWNgirl chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
This was very well written. The tension you created was fantastic to read and I love Sakumo. Thanks for the story. Looking forward to more
Prescripto13 chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
A good read, NC. It was well-written.
SimplyUnsolvedMystery chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Your stories and writing style has been a favorite of mine for a while now. I always look forward to seeing a new story by you and I can't even describe how excited I was to see you do a one shot on two of my favorite characters in Naruto, Kakashi and Sakumo.

As always, your grammar and sentence structure it great. Everything flows so well with how you write. The sentence structures, the short sentences coupled with longer ones, adds to the tension in the story.

Kakashi's fasination with Sakumo's shallow breathing is a perfect way to allude to the future without laying it too heavily on there.

You did a great job on this and I really can't wait to read more from you. _
Ashen Warrior chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
hm...

okay, that definitely got me thinking...

you're pretty deep aren't you?

i'm more of a cracky person... humour in every pore (sometimes I gotta sell the stuff)

its weird & strange but hell, I like it.

consider this a welcome to the Wraith family...

you'll receive your invite tomoro as my phone gt busted & ths 1 isn't as awesome as I was told it was...

looking forward to working (& reading) with u...

later,

ashen