|Reviews for The Wedding Party|
| ECis4Me chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Great first chapter, I'm looking forward to this!
So much for one date with Jay (who I assume is James?) - Looking forward to finding out more about that.
Bella doesn't seem happy. Did she give up on some of her dreams?
Edward seems pretty jaded with regards to relationships too. Looking forward to learning more about him also!
| Peace.Lovee.Edward chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
awn! this story promises to be lovely!
i'm adoring it already!
is Edward the frat guy who looked at her at the caffe?
i can't wait for you to continue!
loving it already!
| 2old4fanfic chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Obviously you plan on torturing me by producing another interesting story while I'm banging at the same two stories I've been working on for 2 years. Not really fair, but I like the way your characters think, so I'm up for the ride. Carry on.
| maggiejoma chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
| 1netka chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
more please. nice first chapter. intriguing. love to see how B and E hook up
| twifan7731 chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Well, I am dying to know more about Bella - and what could have happened with said Jay, that caused her to give up her dreams? And whose wedding is it?
Yeah, I liked it and want to know more! More... more... more...
| coxie chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
I like it...I can't wait to learn more about them. )
| Sverige chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
I like your start. I want to know what happened to her magazine..keep writing!
| sharon89 chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Wow, this really picked my interest.
Bella's enthusiasm is really contagious, it made me smile. :)
Bella in the present not so much, she's definitely unhappy. Wonder what caused that change. Jay and what she had with him? The loss of NewMoon (I only assume this cause she mentioned "the old memories from college and the days of New Moon)? Her job?
I can clearly say that I dont like Jay. He's selfish and annoying the hell out of me with the way he making it sound that it depends on Bella if he keeps or loses his job.
Hmm, wondering whose wedding Edward is attending. :)
Cant wait to see where this is heading. Looking forward to more! :)
| twistedcoincidence chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
very interested so far :) can't wait to see where this goes. i loved the third person start btw, very seamless :)
| martyni chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
A great first chapter. This story has so much potential, can't wait to see what you do with it.
| karolkid chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
Liking this very much so far. Good job!
| DaniBanani78 chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
Like this. I can not wait to read more.
| NanMcCullen chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
I'm really interested in this one... who is Jay? James? And why does Bella feel so obligated to him? Why is she still with him? And is present day 2010? That would be nearly 5 years... so why is she with him 5 years later? So many questions... who is getting married and how will Edward run into Bella at the wedding? I'm assuming she's in the wedding party. Maybe Alice and Jasper? Angela and Ben? Rose wasn't mention before, so I doubt it's her and Emmett. So I'm curious. :)
| luckyirishtart chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
I definitely like this story. Like this Bella. Not sure about Jay, he's kind of a wuss but I realize he's needed. Looking forward to more! TY