|Reviews for Haunted Past|
| JB chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
| TigerNinja16 chapter 8 . 10/29/2012
Ohmigosh, this story is so AMAZING! Please continue.
| Rebekah chapter 8 . 7/27/2012
Great story! Keep updating! Keep writing! AND...
Stay cool! ;D
| moonlight73 chapter 8 . 9/23/2011
PLEASE PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTERS! IT'S SUCH A GREAT,WONDERFUL STORY! PLLLLLEEEEEAAAASSSSSEEEEEE!
| kaitamis chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
HEY IT"S ME AND CAN YOU LET GO WE CAN"T BREATH I HAVE TO SEND IT TO YOU LIKE THIS BECAUSE IT SAID I USED IT UP TO THE LIMIT AND THATS 100 MESSAGES IT STINKS
| Kosaten no Kokinatsuyosa chapter 8 . 6/9/2011
All and all, you're doing pretty good. My only real sugggestion is a bit more description of people and places, because I'm having a hard time getting a mental picture of what's going on, an to lengthen your chapters. AmythistAngel07's advice to me on this kind of thing was to think of what you want to happen like it's a movie in your head, and write that. As for your chapters, write the whole fic out(or even a chuck of the fic, like 5 chapters), then divide everything up into chapters. You nay not post things as quickly, but it's better to have a nice legenthy chapter, than a quickly posted one- your readers are going to read, and I don't think too many are concerned if you spen extra time polishing a chapter. My chapters are usually 5-7 pages long, just to give you an idea.
| Tauria chapter 8 . 6/3/2011
I can't wait for more! I'm happy for Chiro and that his sister is alive! This story is really interesting and it's pretty cool that you got to help raise wolf pups! :DD
| Ennalight chapter 8 . 6/1/2011
Yay they are going to find Chiro's sister! I can't wait for that to happen! This chapter was awesome!
| stormygirl335 chapter 8 . 5/29/2011
Yaya ur not dead! XD so happy u updated! :D keep up the good work :D
| IsabellaZelda chapter 8 . 5/27/2011
Aww! this is so cool! I mean, the story, not everything that Chiro has gone through...I hope you can continue soon, 'cause I like it a lot! :D
| LovelySinner7 chapter 8 . 5/26/2011
OH! I MISSED YOU*GLOMPS* Glad ur back! Yay! Rescue mission! Chiro will get to see his sister.
| WinxPossible chapter 8 . 5/26/2011
Cool, finally you updated. This is cool.
| Ennalight chapter 7 . 5/21/2011
Ok this chapter has really really toutched me. I think one of the saddest chapters yet but I think next chapter will make me cry...
I can't wait until the next chapter of this beautiful story!
| Ennalight chapter 6 . 5/21/2011
Is there a prize for awesomeness? Because you won it!
This was the best chapter yet!
| Ennalight chapter 5 . 5/20/2011
This is getting really interesting. I wonder what will happen next.