Reviews for Torn
lsvllchc chapter 18 . 6/4/2018
This was fantastic! I can only hope one day you come out of retirement. This was such a joy to read!
Magicbook1 chapter 8 . 4/16/2018
Usually I'm on team Edward, but this book, I really want Emmett and Bella together!
quisha1991 chapter 14 . 7/15/2017
What the FUCK! I'm usually team Edward but for this story in team Emmett... And right now I want to slap Bella for being so clueless and not choosing Em... How dare Edward act like he really care about her... Before she couldn't even get a look and now all of a sudden he wants a relationship with her... Pay attention Bella! Ugh
ninny 1 chapter 18 . 7/15/2017
This was a wonderful read and I'm happy emmett won in this story he was so cute
I'm sorry you retired you have a real talent
You'll be missed
Guest chapter 7 . 3/23/2017
I like the love quadrangle with both Ed & Em firmly against James but otherwise jockeying for Bella's affections.
shabrilov chapter 18 . 3/4/2017
I'm not normally a Team Emmett fan, but I absolutely loved this story. I was actually rooting for Emmett after a couple of chapters. Great story, added it to my favorite story list!
TheUnderStudy chapter 18 . 7/17/2016
When my fic girls recommended this to me, I was shocked that I hadn't read this. I am a huge Emmett fan. I absolutely loved this fic. It made me cry, laugh, scream, out my phone in the freezer because I was so afraid about where the story would go. Then my phone died while I was binging all the chapters. Had to lie to my kids that the iPad was dying just so I could get to it to read.

I floved this story and this Emmett. He was just so wonderful and sweet and gorgeous. And just so heartbreaking. Gahhhhhh! Thanks for writing this!
2old4fanfic chapter 7 . 7/14/2016
Mom of celiac daughter. Someone who doesn't cook will have quite a time with it
2old4fanfic chapter 3 . 7/14/2016
Don't tell anyone, but between Edward and Emmett, I'd go for Emmett. Edward was always a little too much of a whiner
renewagain chapter 18 . 7/13/2016
Very good story! I'm happy with the ending...
renewagain chapter 7 . 7/12/2016
Halp. They love each other. Halp!
renewagain chapter 4 . 7/12/2016
This is very good and I'm soooo confused. You are playing with my heart!
Brinkleydeelite chapter 18 . 7/6/2016
i just loved this! Such. Great ending!
jk chapter 18 . 3/9/2016
you know what I fucking hate? I hate when stupid writers put the twilight characters we love with other twilight characters we fucking hate...Edward and Tanya? NO
Edward and angela? Hell NO
Edward and vicki? NO
Edward and Jessica? hell fucking no
Edward and lauran? JUST NO

but you dumbass's do it all the time making me think less and less of Edward...just fucking stop already
jk chapter 11 . 3/9/2016
I was under the impression that Edward is a manwhore...but hes loved bella all this time? yaaa ok..sorry but you don't ignore the one you love whilst fucking everything that walks
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