Reviews for Marking Bella
debslmac chapter 38 . 10/14
:) loved this story
misstequilarose071 chapter 1 . 10/13
Im going to like this.
bmthespian chapter 38 . 10/10
Good story.
jk chapter 9 . 9/16
like the whole pack would just let Edward kill him...and that parting speech of his dads wasn't very was like I love you and now your dead...oh well your fault...
I don't buy that shit...your ruining your own story by being lazy
jk chapter 5 . 9/16
Edward cusses now? I'm not sure I like that..its like he just threw the old him out the window...frozen in time my ass boys from 1918 didn't cuss like that

and whats with the 300 oh yeahs? that was getting annoying
oh yeah bella
oh yea baby
oh yea
oh yeah
oh yeah
geez shut the fuck up
jk chapter 3 . 9/16
wow a whole chapter of bella being fucking stupid...let me guess shes a whole day pregnant and its hormones...lets just go with all of the pregnancy clich├ęs ...stupid, pissy, demanding, whiny, emotional, hungry, fat, swollen, crazy, gassy what else? or maybe your not gonna go that route...we can only hope! maybe bellas just being a fucking child bitch...jake should have just took out the competition
jk chapter 2 . 9/16
Charlie comes home early and bella automatically thinks Jacob called him...ya I don't see it
I strongly suggest that you cut that part out and just have Edward see it in charlies mind and say something to bella about it...I really don't think bellas mind would go right to thinking it was jake like that and she diffinately wouldn't sit on the couch for an hour and make out with Edward while jake was there expecially because she was the one who invited him over..but then again maybe you want the bella in your story to be a cunt...maybe you don't want any of the readers to like her...I sure don't
I'm kinda hoping she'll just fall and die and then we can get on with the story without that annoying bitch
jk chapter 1 . 9/16
so bella invited Jacob over...had him drive all that way or run whatever and she just sat on the couch ignoring him and making out with Edward right in front of him for a whole fucking hour?
wow your bellas a fucking thoughtless cunt
Guest chapter 38 . 8/16
this was the best FanFiction I have ever read! This was really good! I hope you make more stories.
Cassandra chapter 33 . 7/5
Ok the baby should have been a girl!
Cassandra chapter 10 . 7/5
I love it! My mom was upset that Jacob got killed but I don't care!
Diiawb2 chapter 38 . 6/11
That story was terrific! I enjoyed it so much! 3
Tiggy318 chapter 38 . 6/6
Great story! !
Alice Cullen chapter 38 . 6/5
I loved all of your chapters!
Alice Cullen chapter 37 . 6/5
That's not true!I was not having sex with Jasper!
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