|Reviews for The Champion is Never Forgotten|
| MegaDEO062901 chapter 17 . 3/31
Really nice story here. Ash turning into Dark Ash and how they (Ash and May) started their problem. Loved how you used Aura Ash as well and the battle of Psychic and Aura, too bad it did not last that much to see who would've triumphed and the ending was really great. So sad Charizard wasn't there. I'm a big fan of Ash's Charizard. That's all I've got to say about this story. Continue to do more great stories. Kudos
| tryliter chapter 4 . 3/9
You no your logic is dumb here right, 'cause we all no Ash would have died if Brock didn't help the kid, I don't know "eat" it's like your saying that the accident prone, idiotic, slow Ash could survive without Ash. Similarly, Brock informed Ash of a series of qualities necessary to be a proper trainer. Let's not forget the numerous times Brock followed and saved Ash on his precarious adventures. Go back and do your research, please. If your going to right an angst fiction, do it right. Or else, it sounds like Ash is simply whining about living. Dark Ash, more like, Wimp Ash.
| mongiseri chapter 17 . 2/9
I think the biggest positive aspect of this story is how you included lots of creative ideas. I especially loved how you made up words like "Tauros-shit" (which I think is hilarious) and the history between the psychics and the aura guardians. I also felt that the portrayal of certain characters such as Barry and Drew was pretty funny and entertaining to read too. The interactions between the Pokemon such as those between Ash's and May's Pokemon also felt like nice touches to the story's flow.
The grammar was a bit wonky in some places, but it wasn't too bad. Also, I felt that the story was a bit random and a bit hard to keep track with some plot holes in some occasions. Don't get me wrong, as I loved the humor of some scenes such as the drinking party scene or the boys peeking on the girls, but some of these scenes just felt a little bit unnecessary in some places to me. Anyways, great job with this fic!
| mangamanic chapter 1 . 2/7
starting my reread of this for my 4th time
| Aipom4 chapter 17 . 1/3
Yeah that would be funny
| Aipom4 chapter 13 . 1/3
I'm in love with beautifly and butterfrees relationship
| Devrat chapter 17 . 11/10/2016
Your story amazing and vey hooking .please write a squel to this story.
| P14y3r chapter 17 . 8/30/2016
Very interesting story, I especially liked the scenes with the pokemon. I started to doubt that the story would have a happy ending since Ash was still dark by Ch16 but I'm glad that he slightly changed xd
| DMarutyan chapter 17 . 8/23/2016
I know thia isnt a great idea but I liked the story so much that i would like a part 2, i know sequels arent always the best but maybe? Please just make it happen
| I died last year chapter 7 . 8/5/2016
Character bashing is a job for retards
| someone chapter 17 . 4/3/2016
| Abomb chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
Would fit a whole lot better with Lucy
| RixSkywalker1405 chapter 17 . 3/3/2016
The story was absolutely mind blowing! You really kept me on my Toes! There were grammar mistakes but nothing too major as the desired meaning was conveyed. I did realize though that you were consistent with Holly's surname. Chapter 1 said Honoka while the final chapter said Williams so, just keep that on mind.
| Rajatm77 chapter 4 . 2/12/2016
Drew is a bitch... Ash and May are meant to be together...
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/5/2016
Advanceshipping can suck dick~