|Reviews for Journey's Beginning|
| QueenTatooine chapter 10 . 9/23/2016
This was a very interesting take on the whole thing. I enjoyed reading it.
My only comment is a personal pet peeve. When I think of Giggling, it is a high pitched light laugh, chuckling is a low pitched light laugh, that comes from further down in the chest. When you said the doctor giggled my mind instantly provided a bit of a manic sounding giggle, as I couldn't picture a more sane giggle coming from him. Like I said, personal pet peeve, but something that might have interested you.
Thanks for your wonderful story.
| Summer Leah chapter 10 . 8/19/2015
Liked this story a lot. I'd prefer a re-telling
| Godiva9 chapter 10 . 6/1/2015
A truly beautiful and well written story! Thank you so much for writing and sharing! : D
| Hlpur chapter 10 . 5/17/2015
| Bloody Phantom chapter 10 . 1/31/2015
I don't know if you started writing the sequel or not, but I thought I would put in my vote in case you haven't decided. (Although, I'm sure the sequel has been written by now) But I thought it would be nice if its a mixture of the two. Re-do the episodes, but put a lot of your own things into it..and I mean, A LOT of your own things. But have Amy Pond and Rory's story. I don't much care for stories that is word-for-word from the episode..especially when there is another character or two in the mix..things would be completely different. Word-for-word are always boring, especially if I know the episode well enough. Those one always has a lot of dialogue, never enough action and descriptions and things never seem to change. If you don't understand what I mean and if I had to choose one of the options, I'll go with option number two, completely new adventures for them.
| V chapter 5 . 4/14/2014
I appreciate you using some old-school Material. It is always fun to have one of the new companions run into something old. Bridges the two worlds. Thank you.
| Spannerspoon chapter 10 . 2/20/2014
Fantastic! Brilliantly crafted and utterly hilarious and heartbreaking.
Cannot WAIT to read the sequel!
| jenn008 chapter 10 . 2/17/2014
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/13/2014
Do eleven episodes with Rose, Ten and Donna.
| crzykittyfangirl chapter 8 . 1/16/2014
| crzykittyfangirl chapter 10 . 1/5/2014
Wahoo! Long live the best doctor!
| crzykittyfangirl chapter 2 . 1/5/2014
Yay! real ten says i love you!
| hermoine snape chapter 10 . 12/8/2013
That was great. I love how Donna stayed. I love her!
| Kin Pandun chapter 10 . 10/27/2013
I LOVED this fic! I read it all in one go. I can hardly wait to read what happens next! As for how to proceed, I would recommend a mixture of the two approaches. Series 5 with some extra stuff thrown in for fun.
And may I say, you write really emotionally investing scenes. Much like Donna, I was shivering with anticipation for Rose and the Doctor.
Thanks for writing,
| Ophelia Meadows chapter 10 . 9/20/2013
I really adored every minute of this! Not sure if you ever did a sequel but I'm about to look. I plan on reading some of your other Doctor Who stories for sure. Thanks for writing!