Reviews for After Dark
Guest chapter 6 . 3/30
I love your story a lot. Please update soon.
jawssfan chapter 12 . 2/21
My favourite part of the chapter is the relationship between tina and larry, the reason why i love it so much is because of the way he sticks up for her and how it seems to be getting easier for the teenagers, i really hope you keep the brody's in amity island and i really hope sean gets better can you get sean to see a someone to talk to like someone who has trained to help people and maybe the other teenagers can protest that the brody's won't go back to new york!
jawssuperfan chapter 1 . 2/21
My favourite part of the chapter is when mike and larry are talking and the reason why i love it so much is because in the film we don't really get to see the teenagers have one and one conversations and because of that we don't really know how close they are. Also seeing your comment at the start why would someone do that? i know it's really childish and annoying, i know what it is like when you see reviews on your story and i think that people really like it, it's frustrating, i hope somebody stops doing it, you're writing is really improving and the story is really different!
Amelia Marie chapter 7 . 1/31
Hey, i was wondering if you could do something where Mike is in Sean's room and he accidently knocks something over and theres's a book, mike picks it up and see's that there's hundreds of drawing of the shark and what happened whilst they where out at sea and sean takes it to his dad and friends and they show concern for the young boy
SARAH-LEE chapter 6 . 1/31
HEY, THERE GIRLY, UPDATE PLEASE
CHARLE-MARIE chapter 5 . 1/31
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE SOON LOVING YOUR STORY
LINCOLN chapter 4 . 1/31
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
HARRY chapter 3 . 1/31
UPDATE
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31
update update
Jawsfan23 chapter 7 . 1/29
I always thought about how would sean cope with seeing merge being eaten. I know in the movie they had a bit of brotherly interaction with andy/sean whilst they where at sea but they never saw too much between sean/patrick, sean/larry, sean/bob, sean and the rest of the other teenagers. My favourite part of the movie is when they have rescued sean from the up-turned boat and it's after larry has just fallen in and been rescued also. Then there's that little moment after when Andy is "oh god i thought we'ved lost you, it's okay, it's okay." And then there's the bit straight after when Larry checks on Jackie and Brooke says. "we've just gotta keep her warm." then there's a quick shot of andy and sean hugging. It's sooooo cute. I was wondering if you do it from Mike, Timmy's and Polo's POV (Point of View) where they are on the lighthouse waiting for a rescue and there thinking about what has happened to the others and mike's thinking how sean is and where he is okay!
Daisy chapter 6 . 1/29
Your writing is excellent, i've always wondered if this was real life how would the teenagers be affected by this and how they would deal with. I love the the interaction between larry and his dad, it would piss me off too if he'd ignored the shark warnings for the second time espically when his son was involved
Lucy-Jo chapter 5 . 1/29
please update and could you focus the story on more of mike's friends relationship with sean and how it is before and after the shark attack
Marc Gilpin chapter 4 . 1/29
Hey, HoneyBee1 i was directed to your story after ive been talking to one of your followers for quiet a longtime and if you want to know anything about the making of jaws 2 just message or reply to me by this a i'll give you my email
harry chapter 3 . 1/29
OMG UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE
Gabby chapter 2 . 1/29
please please update it's been so long since your last one
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