Reviews for The Galactic Trinity
Atem's Sister Atea chapter 12 . 7/26/2010
That's okay! This chapter was AWESOME! ! !

You're welcome! ! I just didn't want anyone else to get confused about Emma's eyes.

Oh man! ! What could've happened to destroy our home like this? ! ! I just hope everything works and, and Crystal Tokyo can go back to the paradise it's meant to be! ! !

So this mystery woman who works for Discord has her SOUL bonded to him! ! ? And he can kill her the moment she betrays him! ! ! ? THAT HOBKNOCKER! ! ! That's like when Naraku from "Inuyasha" literally held Kagura's heart in his hand, or the Unbreakable Vow from "Harry Potter"! ! ! ! Scratch that, it's ten times worse! ! ! Is there a way to break it without sacrificing her life? ! ! !

OH MY GOD! ! ! THE WOMAN IS KATIE? ! ! ! I had a feeling it was her, but it's still shocking! ! ! And what's with her eyes? ! And why is the mystery man's eyes exactly the same? ! ! Who is he? ! I'm guessing he's either DJ or Alex...

Uh, did you skip back to Present Day Tokyo? I think you forgot to say it. I was a little confused for a few seconds. I thought you shifted to another scene in the far-off future...

Poor Katie. Looks like she's always like this whenever she's about to play her music in public. *sighs* She definitely takes after her mother...

*snorts* If Eric thinks that a doctor and teacher are quite the couple, just wait till after the Big Freeze! !

I KNEW Susan was Sasha! ! She may have fooled the others, but she couldn't fool me! ! !

Whoa, go future Katie! ! I thought she was scary before, but this takes the cake! ! ! She had Sasha running like a cheetah with its tail between its legs! !

So Trista knows whats going to happen if Discord keeps messing with the time-line? And she's going to help Future-Katie change it? *sighs in relief* I thought she go flying off the handle and lose her temper, but then again, Discord IS trying to screw everything up so I think she's willing to make an exception. Thank Selene for that! ! !

Poor Emma. Having her boyfriend stuck a thousand years in the past must be difficult for her. Hopefully things will work out, then she'll be back in his arms before she knows it! !

Oh boy, looks like Jayden's turning out to be a total pervert like Jake in "What If"! I pity anyone who ends up as his girlfriend...

Oh brother! ! DJ and Katie are just as if not more stubborn than Serena and Darien were when they met! ! Katie should at least give DJ a chance to explain! If it weren't for that voice in her head, she would've dumped him then and there! !

Speaking of which, who was that voice in her head? Was it the future Katie?

At least Future-Katie still has her conscience. She just wants to get the job done and doesn't waste any time with senseless violence...

Looks like Future-Katie's interferences are starting to take effect. I just hope this doesn't go blowing up in her face...

Whoa, Sasha's good. She totally fooled Discord! ! Does she plan to pursue a career in acting?

It's about time those two clued in! ! ! I knew that Jack and Sasha were good people, just being manipulated by Discord. They wouldn't have been friends DJ, Alex, and Katie before this mess started if they weren't. I just hope that Endymion and Serenity understand their situation when they arrive in Crystal Tokyo. Hang in there guys, good luck! !

Oh man! ! Just when things were working out between those three, everything goes to heck in a handbasket! ! ! I just hope they can patch things up before it's too late! ! !

Uh, is Future-Katie only acting like a crazy psycho-bitch to throw of any theories on her identity? Or did that develop over time?

Jadeite's claustrophobic? You're kidding right? The strong general of Earth who's always one of the first in a fight against the biggest villains the universe has to offer, and he's scared of enclosed spaces? That's just weird...

What's Future-Katie trying to do? Why would she try to force her pastself to make a choice between her brother and the man she loves? Is it about strengthening their bond?

Whoa! ! ! Didn't see THAT coming! ! ! More future scouts have arrived! ! Are their identities going to be revealed to their respective parents? ! ! If they are, I can't wait to see their reactions! !

Okay, Future-Katie has warned her past-self of what could happen if she doesn't get her act together. Maybe now she'll let DJ explain what happened with him and "Susan". Those two are soul-mates and they have a bond that no one can break.

AWESOME JOB with this chapter! ! ! It was totally nerve-wracking! ! I can't wait for the next one! ! ! Good luck with that, and with the next chapter of "Rekindled"! ! ! !
GoldenDragon326 chapter 12 . 7/26/2010
Your still doing good. .

I still think Alex is the one who died. Is the alive-future-boy (Whom I think is DJ) going to come back and help too? That would interesting. .

See ya next chappie.
rainbabie chapter 12 . 7/26/2010
We're supposed to be in the dark about who dies? For some reason, I thought it was pretty obvious DJ had died... Hmm.. I may be missing something here! Can't wait for your next update!
Bastismyhero chapter 12 . 7/26/2010
I really don't think the chapter disappointing at all! I thought it was great! The parallel universes and seeing Katie at her all time low, albeit her all time high in power. And I still think it was DJ that died... And what is with the freaky eye thing? Does that happen when they become the Galactic Trinity? And the fact that Katie and the survivors eyes are the same make me wonder as well. It could mean that he is Alex, or it could be a product of what happened. Either way I can NOT wait to find out!
ange de l'aube chapter 11 . 7/25/2010
Okay now I'm super-confused...might need to develop a whole new theory about the traitor...

Great Chapter, your love for cliffies is outstanding...

Again sorry for my review being so short and lame, but I'm not even supposed to be reading as I already told you...Shhh!
Luthien Morgon chapter 11 . 7/22/2010
wow, what a fascinating chapter. the mystery woman has got to be Katie. The man is either Alex or DJ but I am inclined to think Alex because of Emma's involvement. Although DJ is also possible. I can't wait to see how this turns out. I really love your writing. I am always completely curious to find out what happens next.
SailorMercuryROCKS chapter 11 . 7/22/2010
Great chapter!

I got really fired up about this one...I had to walk away from my computer several times to cool off *Blush*

Anyway, please keep your muse hard at work, I can't wait for the next chapter!

~SMR
Silvermoonlight9 chapter 11 . 7/21/2010
OOOOOOOOOOH! awesome chapter Sere! your writing keeps getting better and better! please become a published writer! hahah :)

3

Silver
ilovetosmilee chapter 9 . 7/20/2010
Ahh! I love the Katie and DJ moment at the end _ Finally! I'm excited to read the next chapter (:
My Veggie Burger chapter 11 . 7/20/2010
OOoo Is the mystery woman Katie? Did DJ or Alex die in the future? I can't wait to find out. I loved the chapter. Serena's wedding sounds like its gonna be fun, and is there more to this little flu than you're suggesting? I think Susan is definitle Sasha. I can't wait for the update!
saveme57 chapter 11 . 7/19/2010
thanks for updating this story jut seems to get better and better
S dot Serenity chapter 11 . 7/19/2010
I love Amara's brashness :O) As always, thanks for the update! I just love how you're keeping us in suspense with the mystery players, but I have a pretty good hunch about who they are. I just can't wait for everything to hit the fan! lol. All in all, I'm still very interested in what's going to happen next, and that's a great quality in a good story. :) Keep those muses flowing! They've been paying off big time.
fandomLife chapter 11 . 7/19/2010
Another great chapter. The dresses for the wedding sounds just gorgeous. I loved Sere and Dare's bickering. That was hilarious. This was just a great and wonderful chapter. I loved every single bit of it. But GREAT job and good luck on your new story.
Serandi82 chapter 11 . 7/19/2010
You certainly like twists, don't you? I have new guesses, but if I'm even close to right, this is going to be...ooh, good.

Crazy lady who needs Xanax: I'm guessing Katie...

Dead guy: Alex...

Drunk Depressed Guy: DJ

Hmm...UPDATE!

-Serandi
GoldenDragon326 chapter 11 . 7/19/2010
Wow. Lotsa conflicting information here.

First I thought the mysterious figure was Alex. But now that we have the gender stablished its obviously Katie/ Hmmmm. I think Alex is the one who died. Proly protecting Katie.

Man. Tal kabout a mixed up future.

Susan is Sasha in disguise. I KNOW SHE IS! Same first initial... the fact of how sneaky she's being with DJ... And since both Katie and DJ have bad luck with 'picking 'em' (except each other, of course .)...

See ya next chappie. .
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