Reviews for Amenaza |
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![]() ![]() if the world turned into remnant from rwby with the hollows evolving into the grimms and with naruto evolving into a powerful grimm and being the only grimm that has a soul this would be a cool sequel but alban55 has't login for years now so how come nobody try to make a sequel to this like a aftermath and see what naruto is doing in the world that is becoming remnant and also the people who create the stories leave them unfinished because they stop caring or lost motivation so why does nobody try to finish or put their own take on the stories them self when the ones who originally created the stories are not even coming back at all so just finish or put your own take the stories if you want to and why is there nobody who can give other people ideas for stories to create at all and lastly it is hard trying to fine a good the gamer story that is finished p.s sorry for the long rant just tired of seeing good stories not being finish at all |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a stupid story. |
![]() ![]() This novel is very well written. Unfortunately i was hoping for a naruto fanfic and I got naruto if it existed in the bleach universe and he died fighting pain. This is too much emphasis on bleach for me. Think ill come back later when I want something different. Great story though. Just not into it rn |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quickest way to a womens heart is a Chidori or just a simple hand will do |
![]() ![]() ![]() will always be the best bleach or naruto crossover story ever. Your talent is incredible. |
![]() ![]() This was amazing make a part 2 series of this please |
![]() ![]() ![]() just scrolling through reviews wtf is this nigga on? sum "I'd be screwing underaged girls if I was a hollow" BRO WHAAT |
![]() ![]() ![]() On one hand, Naruto is simultaneously the protagonist and the villain, furthermore, he has absolutely zero redeeming qualities. On the other hand, *that's how it's intended in this fic.* This isn't a story about redemption or good triumphing over evil, it's a story about evil triumphing over good, about the cruelty of reality and how you can't always rely on the power of family and friendship to win, how sometimes reality simply doesn't give a shit about you. It's depressing, sickening, and borderline torture porn, but that's how it's supposed to be, it was never trying to be anything else. In conclusion, you made exactly what you set out to create, and as such I applaud you for an amazing piece of work. |
![]() ![]() Wonderful story, reread it a few times already. |
![]() ![]() aruto jumped down from the balcony of the Hokage tower, touching down upon the streets of the village. It was time for him to leave this place for good, both physically and in his memories. It was time for him to move on, and see what would happen without any Shinigami. After all, he had the entire real world to explore...and underage kiddies to fuck. |
![]() ![]() Konohaji should've been fucked by Naruto. |
![]() ![]() I'd be screwing underage girls if I was a hollow. |
![]() ![]() Just saying...haku is fem enough to be counted as a girl. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit the guest below me is a psychopath |
![]() ![]() what a silly chapter. You probably didn't realise it because you were mindlessly bashing the nine tails, but you essentially wrote the strongest tailed beast to be weaker than.. a slightly above average hollow that is not even a gillian. In other words, orihime from the soul society arc could defeat THE NINE TAILS. does that sound right to you? You really suck at writing and I hope a fox scratches and tears your face off of you in your sleep. |