this fanfiction disappointed me, it's the worst shit to be honest

Parabéns pelo enredo glamoroso! E obrigado pela dedicação a essa obra.

Well it’s a I don’t like this Naruto. Too evil and too much of an a**hole for my taste.

Amazing I enjoyed the story all the way to the end

I forgot how sick this was. A part of me wants to cuss you out. A part of me wants to clap. All of me says congrats with the writing.

There's a very big disparity between c1 and c2. Naruto turns into a hollow and is still the same, he dosent even kill the shinigami until he keep trying to kill him after he let him go. Barely an hour later he's suddenly a revenge obsessed lunatic who kills Sasuke and wants to torture Sakura? There isn't any buildup to that at all, just pointless edge

cmon you cant end it like this xd

this feels like garth ennis writing shonen manga

Perfection! Are there similar stories to this?

This story was beautiful i was in between witch team i wanted to win thank you for giving us thus masterpiece

if the world turned into remnant from rwby with the hollows evolving into the grimms and with naruto evolving into a powerful grimm and being the only grimm that has a soul this would be a cool sequel but alban55 has't login for years now so how come nobody try to make a sequel to this like a aftermath and see what naruto is doing in the world that is becoming remnant and also the people who create the stories leave them unfinished because they stop caring or lost motivation so why does nobody try to finish or put their own take on the stories them self when the ones who originally created the stories are not even coming back at all so just finish or put your own take the stories if you want to and why is there nobody who can give other people ideas for stories to create at all and lastly it is hard trying to fine a good the gamer story that is finished p.s sorry for the long rant just tired of seeing good stories not being finish at all

What a stupid story.

This novel is very well written. Unfortunately i was hoping for a naruto fanfic and I got naruto if it existed in the bleach universe and he died fighting pain. This is too much emphasis on bleach for me. Think ill come back later when I want something different. Great story though. Just not into it rn

Quickest way to a womens heart is a Chidori or just a simple hand will do

will always be the best bleach or naruto crossover story ever. Your talent is incredible.