Nice, I thought they would never show Naruto’s second resurrection

an amazingly disturbing story that makes me always want to return to read once more. one of my top 5 favorites of all time.

This is good i for one not gonna talk trash like most people that they think they can do better as a writer but having naruto turned just evil and being a antihero is very good for his character because naruto himself not realistic anyone in naruto chose would be evil or have a vengeful path someone like the punisher for example the leaf village was mean to naruto even when he was a infant he didn't had anyone to be raised at the villagers even made kakashi father to kill himself leaving kakashi all alone so sasuke had every right to destroy the village just like what they did to the uchiha clan and every war that they had started like the rain village

This was not really good... Don't misinterpret me, the writing quality was amazing and it was rather creative but... the story is meh? Villainous protagonists need a bit more charisma to offset how hateful they are to the reader, your Naruto just isn't... He is actually pretty boring as a villain, which would jave been okay if you had done the uno reverse card and made him lose... But this boring villain winning is just... meh... It is original and not something commonly done but it aint good. For a villain win the villain needs to be more like Aizen or the like, charismatic, intelligent... it must make evil look classy, beautiful and cool. Your Naruto just is not that, he is just petty af. It would have been at least tragic of only at the end, after satisfying his bloodlust, regained his lost compassion and became repentant of what he had done, crushing him, that would at least be poetic and ironic... But for this boring petty Villain to win and be like, "well that's all folks, gotta find a new hobby" is just... unsatisfying. This effect is amplified because the writing IS GOOD. If this was some poirly written crap it would be just normal, but for thus level of writing to have such a shitty protagonist and ending is just... contrasting, like a poop made out of gold with diamonds engarced... good material but the gorm us still that of a poop, this is like as if someone had a diamond on the rough and masterly cut it into the form of a pp. sigh... Well at least the writing was phenomenal and it was not a cannon tag along, that already puts this on the top 1%

this fanfiction disappointed me, it's the worst shit to be honest

Parabéns pelo enredo glamoroso! E obrigado pela dedicação a essa obra.

Well it’s a I don’t like this Naruto. Too evil and too much of an a**hole for my taste.

Amazing I enjoyed the story all the way to the end

I forgot how sick this was. A part of me wants to cuss you out. A part of me wants to clap. All of me says congrats with the writing.

There's a very big disparity between c1 and c2. Naruto turns into a hollow and is still the same, he dosent even kill the shinigami until he keep trying to kill him after he let him go. Barely an hour later he's suddenly a revenge obsessed lunatic who kills Sasuke and wants to torture Sakura? There isn't any buildup to that at all, just pointless edge

cmon you cant end it like this xd

this feels like garth ennis writing shonen manga

Perfection! Are there similar stories to this?

This story was beautiful i was in between witch team i wanted to win thank you for giving us thus masterpiece

if the world turned into remnant from rwby with the hollows evolving into the grimms and with naruto evolving into a powerful grimm and being the only grimm that has a soul this would be a cool sequel but alban55 has't login for years now so how come nobody try to make a sequel to this like a aftermath and see what naruto is doing in the world that is becoming remnant and also the people who create the stories leave them unfinished because they stop caring or lost motivation so why does nobody try to finish or put their own take on the stories them self when the ones who originally created the stories are not even coming back at all so just finish or put your own take the stories if you want to and why is there nobody who can give other people ideas for stories to create at all and lastly it is hard trying to fine a good the gamer story that is finished p.s sorry for the long rant just tired of seeing good stories not being finish at all