Reviews for Amenaza |
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![]() ![]() This was amazing make a part 2 series of this please |
![]() ![]() ![]() just scrolling through reviews wtf is this nigga on? sum "I'd be screwing underaged girls if I was a hollow" BRO WHAAT |
![]() ![]() ![]() On one hand, Naruto is simultaneously the protagonist and the villain, furthermore, he has absolutely zero redeeming qualities. On the other hand, *that's how it's intended in this fic.* This isn't a story about redemption or good triumphing over evil, it's a story about evil triumphing over good, about the cruelty of reality and how you can't always rely on the power of family and friendship to win, how sometimes reality simply doesn't give a shit about you. It's depressing, sickening, and borderline torture porn, but that's how it's supposed to be, it was never trying to be anything else. In conclusion, you made exactly what you set out to create, and as such I applaud you for an amazing piece of work. |
![]() ![]() Wonderful story, reread it a few times already. |
![]() ![]() aruto jumped down from the balcony of the Hokage tower, touching down upon the streets of the village. It was time for him to leave this place for good, both physically and in his memories. It was time for him to move on, and see what would happen without any Shinigami. After all, he had the entire real world to explore...and underage kiddies to fuck. |
![]() ![]() Konohaji should've been fucked by Naruto. |
![]() ![]() I'd be screwing underage girls if I was a hollow. |
![]() ![]() Just saying...haku is fem enough to be counted as a girl. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit the guest below me is a psychopath |
![]() ![]() what a silly chapter. You probably didn't realise it because you were mindlessly bashing the nine tails, but you essentially wrote the strongest tailed beast to be weaker than.. a slightly above average hollow that is not even a gillian. In other words, orihime from the soul society arc could defeat THE NINE TAILS. does that sound right to you? You really suck at writing and I hope a fox scratches and tears your face off of you in your sleep. |
![]() ![]() finally, kyuubi. Kyuubi is the best thing about naruto :) |
![]() ![]() naruto shouldn't be this weak, especially if he took the Nine tails' chakra along with him. Never mind the fact his ordinary chakra is massive |
![]() ![]() I hope this doesn't turn into a cringefest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Goated story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, it's a bit ridiculous at this point. You kill all the Espada and keep all the captains alive. It's not realistic knowing that these Espada are supposed to be stronger than in the canon. |