it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates

Well, I hope you update soon. The other naruto fight was just plain stupid. I hope the naruto kyuubi fight will be more interesting. Well, aside from that, the rest of the story has a okay plot.

Post more! Great story!

Damn great fic so far. Love the way you manage to give back some sanity to Naruto. Thou I still hope you have him ravage Konoha.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Bravo Bravo! this is definetly one of the best hollow narutos i have ever read, i like how you chose to differ by not making naruto godly from the start, i also like your naruto's personality, really fits the whole betrayed by everyone etc motif, excellent job!

i also like how you not only show us Barragan, but instead add to his character so that he is not such a one dimensional character the whole galdiator concept is pretty awesome, i can totally see hollows doing something like that.

Can't wait for the next chap!

It started out good, i was all pumped for a battle between kyuubi and naruto, but got some weird mind battle instead. I am excited for the next chap. so keep em coming!

great chapter, great fight scenes, but I know that the Kyuubi is much stronger than what Naruto said his strength level was. With just four tails, Naruto created a MASSIVE blast and shock wave, just by swinging his arm. With two tails, he created a shockwave for over a mile just by punching hard. With one tail, he sent Orochimaru flying hundreds of feet just by punching him. No creature in the Bleach universe, except Ichigo in his New Hollow Form (the one he beat the crap out of Ulquiorra in) , and Aizen and Ichigo in their final fight, were capable of creating shock waves just by swing an appendage, and their shock waves were much, much smaller than Kyuubified Naruto's. So its obvious that Kyuubi is much, much, MUCH stronger than Naruto said he was.

Good story so far.

Insane Naruto is crazy though, a little one dimensional and some what boring.

Naruto fighting insanity and drifting in and out isn't, much more interesting. I'm sure Naruto will defeat Kyuubi, probably go Adjuchas and blah blah blah, but Fuermos makes for a great counter, I'm sure he will discuss his distaste for Naruto's actions.

I'm sure Naruto can be a insane brutal maniac but with a little honor, not going out of his ways to brutalize people but just killing them cause that's extremely arrogant.

Well thats just whats I think, go write your story.

Out of curiosity, just when will Naruto be going back to Konoha? I mean it's fairly obvious that even with his shingami's actions he still wants to achieve his goal(destroying konoha) and a war does seem like a good time for him to start wrecking havoc. So are you gonna have him return during the war with Iwa or are you going to wait for a bit longer?

Its rare to see a well done Bleach and Naruto crossover, but this is defintely very well done. I am interested on what your going to do with his emotions so please keep up the good work/

Great chap! Hope to see Naruto nuking Konoha soon.

Update soon!

interesting it up

I don't know... This started out okay, but lately I've been starting to lose interest.

I think that it's mainly about how Naruto's Hollow has been acting. Really, I would have thought that he would have just spent some time in the Menos forest until he leveled up some. Instead he's going around, totally weak and spouting off a lot of random crap...

It just doesn't really seem like something that a hollow would do. Feed, get stronger, feed more... until around Adjuchas and later Vasto Lord status at least. While other hollows might mill around, Naruto's always had a strong urge to reach the top, and I really think that he would keep that, as it is a strong, positive, survival trait.

Pretty cool so far dude. The plot is fairly decent (which can't be said about half the crap on this site) and your grammar, while not flawless, is certainly above quite a few around here. I will be anxiously awaiting the alert of your next chapter.

would Naruto absorb the souls of the people who are using the fox cloaks to gibe him more power? because that would grant him even more strenth after he absorbs Kyuubi himself