kill them all naruto!

Interesting plot you've got here so far. I like how you changed the plot from, instead of Naruto giving some cheesy speech to Pain, Naruto dies mid-battle.

Also, I really like the way you kill Naruto, as morbid as that sounds. Everyone has him die in some big battle, where Naruto makes some big damn sacrifice, or something to that effect. You however, thought outside of the box and killed Naruto through Chakra Exhaustion, and for that, I applaud you. Not many writers get that creative.

I felt that Naruto winning against the Shinigami was a bit... boring. I felt that the fight should have dragged on into the second chapter, seeing as Naruto was transformed into a body that he had no real combat experience in. Say what you want, but it's a pretty drastic change from fighting on two feet, to fighting on four.

Also, how did Naruto know to eat the Shinigami? The Shinigami only told him that Hollows eat humans, though, I guess Naruto could have just used common sense to realize that Shinigami are basically just humans with extra powers.

But why the hell did the Shinigami explain himself at all? I would think he would prefer death, rather than give a Hollow any information that it wants. I'll chalk that one up to the Shinigami's arrogance though, since he thought Naruto would be an easy kill.

I expect to see more soon, since this story looks promising.

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Emperor Lelouch Lamperouge

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Hmm, this does seem like a rather good crossover. And please, define pairing to me. Would pairing be a long time relationship, or just a one-night stand? Because I think that the latter would be a fair idea, of course, once he becomes an Arrancar! Or will he... EPIC IDEA!

And I have never heard of chakra overuse, but it makes sense. And also...

Shinigami seem to be brainwashing.

YOU WILL OBEY CAPTAINS

HOLLOWS ARE EVIL

CENTRAL 46 ARE ABSOLUTE POWER

HOLLOWS ARE EVIL

WE MUST KILL HOLLOWS

HOLLOWS ARE EVIL

that kind of thing.