Reviews for Amenaza
Thanks chapter 1 . 5/25/2023
Just saying...haku is fem enough to be counted as a girl.
Logicalillogical chapter 41 . 5/14/2023
Holy shit the guest below me is a psychopath
maalik chapter 8 . 5/12/2023
what a silly chapter. You probably didn't realise it because you were mindlessly bashing the nine tails, but you essentially wrote the strongest tailed beast to be weaker than.. a slightly above average hollow that is not even a gillian.

In other words, orihime from the soul society arc could defeat THE NINE TAILS.

does that sound right to you? You really suck at writing and I hope a fox scratches and tears your face off of you in your sleep.
Maalik chapter 6 . 5/12/2023
finally, kyuubi.

Kyuubi is the best thing about naruto :)
maalik chapter 3 . 5/12/2023
naruto shouldn't be this weak, especially if he took the Nine tails' chakra along with him. Never mind the fact his ordinary chakra is massive
maalik chapter 1 . 5/12/2023
I hope this doesn't turn into a cringefest.
ocularlemur chapter 7 . 4/19/2023
Goated story
BlueMapple chapter 58 . 4/3/2023
Honestly, it's a bit ridiculous at this point. You kill all the Espada and keep all the captains alive. It's not realistic knowing that these Espada are supposed to be stronger than in the canon.
MoinLeute chapter 43 . 3/27/2023
Why is Naruto shouting out his abilities after all this time like a typical super villain that will be pit in jail like 10 min later.
Guest chapter 28 . 3/18/2023
So aren't we gonna acknowledge that Konoha basically conquered the other villages. Also whatever happened to Obito and the Akatsuki? Also whatever happend to Yamato, Sai, and alot of the other people in Konoha? Also shouldn't Hashirama and Tobirama be in the Soul Society? I've just started Bleach but don't Shinigami live for centuries? So they shouldn't also be there?
Guest chapter 44 . 3/18/2023
Tragic. That's all I have to say. Naruto Uzumaki own of the most selfless and heroic people in fiction, the one who sought to fight against fate and become Hokage, who thanks to the bonds of his friends became who he was. Died not out of any fancy jutsus, not out of sacrificing himself, not out of his own terms. Died of Chakra Exhaustion, and it was because his dad wanted to help him, ain't that a bitch. So much like in his life Naruto rose from the ground and became one of the most powerful beings in the afterlife. Everyone in the Soul Society fought so hard in order to just to stop him, and in the end it didn't even mattered. Ichigo died a really sucky life, this guy was basically the second coming of Naruto, he had the determination, the guts, the compassion, the heroism of Naruto, and resolved to be a good if rough person despite the death of his mom. And he died much like how Naruto died, undignified and knowing all his friends were dead, it's even more sad knowing how much he was going to do in canon when he died, even more so for Naruto knowing how he would have brought peace to the world and gained his happy ending. Minato's death was tearjerking. He lost his wife and his kids, all to a monster he called son, and he died. 10/10 would recommend. I have some critics like I think Ichigo should have had a bigger role. Yeah I know that he ain't supposed to be the protagonist but I think he and Naruto should've had a more personal stake in things you know. Maybe Naruto hates his guts for being a reflection who his was before died, but that's incredibly minor. I do wonder what happened to the Tailed Beasts since they weren't bonded to their Jinchuriki doesn't that mean they should have reappeared somewhere down the line? Anyways I recommend this and hope the TV Tropes page gets expanded.
KnellaLuna chapter 9 . 3/11/2023
I don’t need sleep, I need answers!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/5/2023
Lmao so the kage are weaker than an unseated shinigami and common hollows but Chad could hurt them with a cellphone post. Not biased
Guest chapter 33 . 3/2/2023
Hey have you ever thought of posting a story about the Konoha group's perspective on the story?
Guest chapter 2 . 3/2/2023
Yeah I think this is how Naruto's interaction with the group should have went down.
Naruto: Do you want to know why I wanted to be Hokage? You see I wanted people to like me. To acknowledge me. I was alone, everyone treated me like I was a demon a beast. Something that would just snap and kill all of you. I was insulted. Treated like a laughing stock. So I wanted to be Hokage so people would like me. It seemed like it was starting to come to pass, I made many friends who trusted and cared for me, they stopped hating me, the would care for me, they would mourn for me. But turns all of that meant jack shit, when I actually died. As I risked my life time and time again for the village, as I risked life and limb for a village who hated me. After I died. None of you cared, at all. You never changed your opinion on me in the academy, you just kept it silent until I Fucking Died! My death was all I meant to do? You're saying dying was my destiny! Did any of you object when the fucking ANBU took my corpse for experimentation? No you didn't. When the old man announced that I effectively was turned into mass produced weapons, none of you objected, you didn't have any anger or anything about me being dishonored. You're emotions were indifference. My friendship with all of you was fake, like an illusion. My bonds were not real at all. I tried to remember iruka sensei. But in the end he was wrong. I was a beast, just searching for power for my self. I turned into a Hollow, I killed a Shinigami soon after. Tasted really good by the way. I eventually decided to kill the Kyubi because he would soon be free and kill me before I would have my revenge. But in my mind I saw...me. A human me dressed in the clothes of a spouted off bullshit on how he was how I was supposed to be when I died. He said if he could kill me he would take control of my body and reunite with all of you traitors. I killed him of course. But he managed to restore all of my positive emotions. The hopes of making me who I was before, I just drowned it out. I soon killed the Kyubi. But he revealed something interesting on how I died. Care to here it?
Flashback
Kuruma: Wait! Don't you at least want to know the circumstances behind your death?"
Naruto: What do you mean, the "circumstances behind my death". I thought I simply died of chakra overuse?"
Kuruma: Oh, please. Like you could ever die of that while I am sealed in you."
Naruto: Then-?
Kuruma: Oh, it's very simple. You didn't die of chakra overuse... at least on your own you didn't. Your body and myself would alert you to this if you actually were dying from chakra overuse. Think of it like pain; it's a signal that alerts your brain of something wrong. You see, your father had a very pivotal role in all this."
Naruto: My father?
Kuruma: Yes... your father," That man's consciousness was set to appear in the seal should you activate eight tails, which you in fact did. He then would restore both the seal... and your chakra,"
Naruto: But-
Kuruma: Except he didn't restore your chakra. He only believed he was restoring your chakra. Artificially restoring chakra is impossible in itself. The only way to do it is to have it be restored naturally. The fool didn't know, and despite his petty beliefs, he attempted to restore your chakra. Yet, all he did was numb your ability to sense that your chakra was running out. Sort of like adding an adrenaline rush."

"You get it, now? You went back into battle believing you had chakra, as you couldn't feel any chakra fatigue. You kept on exerting and exerting and forcing the chakra to come. And then finally, it caught up with you. Your chakra coils were strained too much, and the worse case scenario happened. . . . . ."

". . . . . .You died."
Flashback ends.
Naruto: I can tell that it's one hell of a shock that it's his fault for making me die.
I'm to lazy to write the rest, so if someone actually reads this, I ask to make the rest of this, hopefully one who has better Grammer then me. Side note if Minato was in the Soul Society for 20 years before Naruto died, how come he never figured out Obito wasn't there. Also what happened to Gaara and Obito himself?
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