Holy Shit! that was epic thank you so much this was amazing :)

Forbidden Yaoi.
Love that brother

Normally i don't like crossover stories but i absolutely loved this story and i have only watch bleach to when Ichigo first transformed into vasto lord and i was still able to follow along and understand everything. Fantastic story.

Note to self in case I get curious: Naruto is an EVIL hollow, just don't.
To the author; I don't mean to sound offensive, this is the third time I came across this and I don't want to make a fourth.

again prob around 10th or 11th time i read this and always feel Sad with fuermos death...

Would be funny if the world turned into Remnant from RWBY

I've been looking for a good evil Naruto fic for so long that didn't have some random half-assed redemption arc and that he actually stays evil until the end, and this was amazing. I only have two issues with this fic. The first is that I think Gaara could've been an amazing long-term companion/subordinate like Ulquiorra, Grimmjow and Nnoitra instead of being killed off within a chapter of his introduction. The second thing is that hollow Konohamaru had no interaction with any of the Konoha shinobi, or more specifically his grandfather.

You made narutoverse too weak. I coudnt really get into it.

Lmfao. That ending was expected, quite funny.

This is one of the most disturbing books I've ever read

i might have seemed really harsh in my previous review, i did not mean to attack you.

christ this fanfiction is one the worst examples of revenge fantasy jack off fanfiction i have seem besides that coincidently enough another naruto fanfiction crossover, what was the point of this story? you never feel an ounce of sympathy for any of the main protagonist, which you state are supposed to be villains. the ending itself is just simply boring, "woah its shocking how the main character won!11!" yeah kinda expected that from this. this story honestly just feels like a massive shit that was taken on both bleach and naruto. im glad i got to skim through most of this story instead of actually reading this torture porn of a "fanfiction" like Bruh.

in all honestly this just feels like some sort of story you started to spite people or fans of either fandoms, its overly long and i can just feel the barely hidden amusement in your torture scenes i would say its sickening but i think you take enjoyment out of that, no disrespect i just really hate this story and what it stands for and its strange popularity. i havnt checked the rest of your stories so this might just be a black sheep of your fanfiction, ill probably read those instead of skimming.

to sum it up, this is just not my thing. I feel like you made this more for yourself than you did for your readers.

Just read the first and last chapter. But, somehow I know the story is fucked. And, the writing quality.. hmm.. I ain't a writer myself, but my essay has never been bad. Your English kinda feels off. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think you're an English native speaker.

Anw, I won't judge your story for everyone has their own taste. I'm here searching for a writer who knows how to write. In the scale of 1 to 10, my opinion of you is 7.5

Hot. Fucking. Damn.

I found out about this fanfic a couple weeks ago, and came into it hopeful. My expectations were moderately high, based on the hype that surrounded this tale. I'm fairly experienced with fanfics, though this was my first Naruto/Bleach crossover. I like to think myself an expert at judging the quality of these stories, but I'm honestly a rank amateur at writing them. 66 chapters, 400k words, and two weeks later...

I am amazed. You took a running start and pole-vaulted right over my expectations, as if they were just laying there in the dirt. Every aspect of this was a joy to read, save for the end. But when the ending is the worst part because it exists, I'll have to let it slide. A perfect balance between the light and the dark, the heavy and the humorous. Never have I found it a struggle to read through this, and not once did I read even a single sentence that I didn't enjoy. No, it may not be perfect. But perfection in writing is a very, very difficult thing to achieve. You have scaled the mountain, and Amenaza is the hand outstretched to grasp towards the peak. And this story came the closest to reaching the top that I've ever seen.

Magnificent work. I cannot congratulate you enough, nor can I garner for you the attention this story deserves. I only wish I could've found your story sooner, but even that is a minor want. Few names are inscribed upon the records of authors that have exceeded my expectations with their fanfictions.

Alban55 has very solidly, and very definitely, made it to the forefront of those records. I salute you, and aspire to be even a fraction as good at what I do as you are.

me encanto la historia, aunque deberia sobrevir algunos pero bueno es olo mi opnion personal, y hace mucho que no veo una historia tan bien cuidada y que le pusieran tanto amor, me encanto todo