Wow! The visible efforts you've put in the story is mind blowing, and so is the story. I love your Edward and Bella..

Haha. Shiftless little bastards...

ya I didn't get that at all. here bella is having sex with Cullen and I'm still thinking of Edward as assward piece of shit manwhore...she gave in to him waaaaaay too damn quick for me. you didn't even give the reader a chance to like Edward before this all went down...so hes still nasty used up manwhore and bella is now a easy pathetic skank...good job

This is so much MORE than I thought it would be. And so much better. It really sucks you in and it was amazing. I loved it!

Just had a re read and loved it, I always come back to your stories when i can't find anything good to read, works every time!

This is such a beautiful story. I hadn't read it in so long. I'm very pleased I can a crossed it in my Favorites list.

Great story! Loved the reactions between Edward and Bella.

beautiful

I loved your smart, sexy story within a story! The back and forth of the first chapter wowed me. Of course I was completely charmed by Edward - most especially because of his dogged pursuit of his take no prisoners Bee Girl.

My heart still aches for Julia and Dom Fernando Amaral though. Guess we all can't have our happy ending.

shit. I JUST found this story! It's FANTASTIC! It WOULD make an awesome movie! Dayum. I want more of these two (your version)!

This is one of my favorite stories, one of my bad day re - reads.

I always enjoy Epov's

Even if there had been other entries...I'm sure that you would have been declared the winner. It's just that good.

You rock!

As usual, excellent writing. It was fun!