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Is Jasper staying back because his scars will set her off? I know that Edward needs to help with the "voices" in her head, but Jasper is the newborn expert, so why is Edward telling him what to do? Jasper should be the one in charge!

Ok well lemme just say, I love your writing! I just happened upon your story when I googled how to use "manifest themselves" and was hooked immediately...and I have to tell you, I hated Twilight! I'm not young, a professional, and love to read...you need to try writing your own stuff!

love this story and I want more, its sooo good

I love this so far :3

I am so glad you worked through the Charlie/Cath angsty no sex hopefully now they can meet Nessie? and get on with planning a wedding for both Nessie and her grandpa.

I'm so excited to see an update from you Chip! We were in Poland for 1 month and so I'm really behind on all my fave updated fics, and it's really nice to read this one this morning, especially THIS chapter. Hubba hubba! ;) I love it when I wake up and see a new chapter from you in my in-box!

"Frustrating? Is the Pope Catholic?"

LMAO! Ad I love how his concern is evident to her, that they are that in tune with each other. This was a vey beautiful and sexxxaaaay chapter, and I love how it's progressing!

I love this!

Yay an update!

I have to tell you how much I love your Charlie. So few people treat him as such an important character, much less go into depth! I love how you incorporate his policeman training too - Charlie is not as stupid as many think.

I really love how you depict the healing process in this fic, and how it is dealt with by the characters. You really have a talent for writing!

Can't wait for the next one :)

Next chapter please?

I love this story D Cath its great, Charlie... I just want to hug him.

update soon?

"Look how that turned out. I had to rush to Volterra to save you." I slyly smirked up at him.

More like smack some bloody sense into him! lol

I whipped my head around, transferring my glare to Jacob. "Jake, yes, it would have been a good idea to ask Renesmee's medieval father permission first,"-I turned back to Edward-"but might I remind you, dearest husband, that once upon a time, a long time ago, you yourself gave me a ring - an engagement ring - before ever speaking to Charlie." I continued to stare at Edward, his eyes rising slowly from his lap to meet mine.

BAM! TOLD! Edward, meet your ass on a silver platter.

"Wait 'til Alice finds out."

*snort* She'll pitch a fit.

I fucking love the Chief, from his sarcasm and humour to his inability to understand technology. He's just the bestest. *sigh*

I loved it! love, love, loved it!

Awesome Chapter!

"Charlie's insides were a mess, and so I did what I could to help him, as he'd always done with me, sending him what good I could - all of my love."

So sweet. I really loved this chapter Chipper! I always get excited when I see you post, and this was no exception. Thank you for sharing this story with us!