Reviews for The Everlasting Second
fanservice-chan chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Nice, Hop, very nice. Though you mispelled from in the last section before Risa said yes. "It was a nice night, and she'd ended it with a kiss on the cheek form Roy." Other than that, amazing. You have a thing for fluff. Please write more like this and less like "How Much?" (depressing but good).
adelaidemiller chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
I like that you made reference to Riza as a whimsical teenage girl. Because sometimes we forget that, I think.

And I like the time jumping. That was very effective in creating the moment, I think.
heart chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
luv it...
Rojas Walrus chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
I half expected her to say no. Good fic, btw
BlackBrightField2007 chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
aww sweet!
wiltedhouseplants727 chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
loved it... brings back memories