Reviews for La Dolce Vita: Hollywood Living
Guest chapter 25 . 8/27/2014
I"m rereading your story for the second time now and still enjoying it. You do have the gift of gab. Do you have the ability to do word replacements easily where you put in one word and it changes it everywhere in the story? If so, loose needs to be changed to lose. That's all.
Now, back to the story!
Whovian22 chapter 38 . 7/12/2014
I am one hundred percent Team Edward. What Bella did was fucked up and as sad as it is that the kids have to be affected by it, the break up is necessary. Edward shouldn't have to deal with that, no one should. Bella needs to get her shit together before they can come back together.
Whovian22 chapter 10 . 7/10/2014
i dont understand. Edward told Esme that they hadnt gone on a date yet but they said that their lunch was their first date. I really like the story, but the continuity could use a little work.
kryman002 chapter 49 . 5/3/2014
Amazing story. All it was missing was a baby
Ginabella59 chapter 11 . 4/29/2014
Good chapter***
Ginabella59 chapter 10 . 4/28/2014
Good chapter again
Ginabella59 chapter 9 . 4/27/2014
Good chapter
Ginabella59 chapter 8 . 4/26/2014
Good chapter again
Ginabella59 chapter 7 . 4/26/2014
Good chapter
Ginabella59 chapter 6 . 4/25/2014
Good chapter
Ginabella59 chapter 5 . 4/21/2014
Good chapter...until tomorrow
Ginabella59 chapter 4 . 4/20/2014
Another good chapter...until tomorrow
Ginabella59 chapter 3 . 4/19/2014
Another good chapter
Ginabella59 chapter 2 . 4/19/2014
Good chapter again
Ginabella59 chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
Good first chapter
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