Reviews for La Dolce Vita: Hollywood Living
JJ1234 chapter 12 . 4/18/2010
hey hey i really like, it keep updating, i would like to see what ends up happening:)
sindose chapter 12 . 4/18/2010
I lOVE THIS STORY ! , i thought it would be gay and everything but after i read it , it turned out to be really good , i stayed up untill 3:30 ready your chapters :L , anyways your doing a great job on both storys so keep it up! :D:D

FanofFanFic28 chapter 12 . 4/17/2010
Well bellas not quite over her issues with Jake. But I bet he really left an emotional mark on her. Ps yay for French waffle cakes lol. Been there done that! Also I can't wait til she meets the rest of the fam as his official girlfriend. And I know Tanyas gonna b like WTF! And jakes gonna come to la. I know he is. N when he does man oh man...drama! Keep it up...I'm hooked.
Ender-Flynn chapter 12 . 4/17/2010
well well well... firstly, thanks so much for updating today, unfortunately on my part, i didn't get to read it until almost 9:30 - 10:30 at night... the entire day i was busy... making me really tired by now...but u did such an amazing job that i must give an amazing review. . .

i love the intimacy that's between bella and edward- it's so well written, i can picture the entire scene in my head, playing like a movie, and i revel in it :)

jacob is a nutter... such a total opposite from thvc, it's like he's a diff person.. but two different stories, two different characterizations, so that's fine...

i'm happy the kids are fine with the closeness and togetherness that they show for now- and how nice they treat eachother...

keep up the great work.. can't wait to hear what happens next :)

sorry i can't write any more now, and that it took so long to review.. but i did so that's good...:) keep writing :)

if u need any advice, or somehow come across writers block, i'm always ready to give a bit of input on my ever flowing images of ideas in my head.. but that should not be a problem for u, since the story seems to be flowing well...

k anyway...

nighty night..

and make the next chapter (for both stories LONG- i lovee long chapters :) )
acechica chapter 12 . 4/17/2010
Alrighty now. That was a little intense, normally I love Jacob, but I knew he was gonna be dangerous. I'm so rooting for Edward and Bella, their love is so deep even early in their relationship. Loving the family bonding time. Are they gonna be able to take it slow? Esme is gonna freak because she hasn't met Bella yet. Wow... Can't believe I'm gonna say this, but I can't wait for monday...
zgarza01 chapter 12 . 4/17/2010
Beautifully done. I like my lemonade extra lemony.
lvk1978 chapter 12 . 4/17/2010
I love stories where Edward is an actor so I thought I'd give your story a whirl and it has been wonderful! I've had a blast reading it and I absolutely adore your Bella and Edward. The kids are pretty special, too.

I can't wait to see where you're taking our favorite "Dynamic Duo"! Thanks for sharing your story with us.
cullengirl08 chapter 12 . 4/17/2010
What is Jake's deal anyway? He and Bella are divorced, so she can see anybody she wants to. Besides, he's living with someone and has been since before she even moved to California. I'm just glad that Belal told Edward about Jake calling and didn't just keep it to herself. They need to be honest and upfront with each other about things if they are going to make a go of all this.
ooohbeee chapter 12 . 4/17/2010
Bella needs to wise up to that good for nothing Jacob. I figured he would cause problems for Bella. He now sees she is moving on with her life. So now he's trying to control the situation. Will Jacob move to LA as well? Great story love it : ) Ohbe
DodgerMcClure chapter 12 . 4/17/2010
Jacob the jackass
Sofia chapter 12 . 4/17/2010
great chapter.. it seems that there might be some big drama coming up!
PoppingLydia chapter 12 . 4/17/2010
oh no! i hope it doesnt get to nasty, i hope jacob doesnt go insane and hurt will. great chapter though. worth waiting for. x
Bunch2009 chapter 12 . 4/17/2010
I am glad they had the talk. Open communication is one of the keys to a good relationship. I have a feeling they will encounter a lot of obstacles along the way. Their friendship will help them get through it. Thank you for the excellent chapter. I enjoyed reading it.
Marianka chapter 12 . 4/17/2010
Jake is a Asshole,

i love it how you


ican never say

something bad about that..)
joanna.e chapter 12 . 4/17/2010

saw glee by the way
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