|Reviews for Mein Vollkommener Beschützer|
| Eindrucksvoll chapter 1 . 8/13
I like it more with more German. My Elnglish isnt so good so it was kind of nice
| SKyflame313 chapter 12 . 7/20
For the previous chapter: I thought the Night Fury was the unholy offspring of Lightning and Death itself. Not thunder and night. But anyway...
| SKyflame313 chapter 11 . 7/20
Now i get that it is a mix (i think) between the books and the movie!
| SKyflame313 chapter 9 . 7/20
i think it is laid beneath the trees not lied
| SKyflame313 chapter 4 . 7/20
Do the Vikings even know what horses are?
| SKyflame313 chapter 3 . 7/20
Cool chapter! There were a few spelling mistakes but none to bad.
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/19
THE SEED OF ODEN! I wasn't sure if it was what I was thinking, but I totally cracked up anyway.
| WeRiseAbove chapter 1 . 3/31
Okay I know this is gonna sound horrible like "I HATE YOU. NO OFFENSE." or something but the first chapter was sooo hard to follow. First it was a flashback and then I thought it was present time but then it went into multiple other flashbacks...? Back to present time in the weird scene where Toothless somehow grabbed Hiccup and flew away with him but it referred to it in past tense... (That is where I gave up) Plus why did Stoick hate dragons so much again? He's protective of Hiccup and I can see him glaring at the sky and shaking his head when Toothless gets mad or something but now he's threatening him... When does this even take place? Right after the first movie? Right before the second? It seems like this could become a really good story, it has a great plot, but I can't read a story I don't understand at all! And I'm not a bad reader, at all. So yeah. Well bye, sorry if you absolutely hate me now because this is such a horrible review... :/ :( I just got really mad reading this xD
| Crescental chapter 16 . 3/27
Loved the story, I just didn't want to stop reading once I started it :D
There were a few spelling errors here and there, but it didn't detract from the story in the slightest ;)
My only really complaint, though it was mostly my own problem, was that it was hard to remember what the chieftains and their sons and daughters looked like or what their relationships to other characters were
But anyway, I absolutely adored the story :D
| Fragments of Imagination chapter 16 . 1/25
Good story :)
| Keiri Kurosukara chapter 14 . 10/2/2014
"WE'RE UNDER ATTACK!" Loved it! lol
| ivanganev1992 chapter 16 . 8/25/2014
Nice touching story with min bloodshed and for the died too bad of they had pure good hearths , for the bad naturally bad , unassepting , died in the surcubstances , personal living joy (favourite for Alvin befour " Ow God/Gods changed his point of view , great mighty warrior and fulfiling provably his dream to learn the secret who might becoming his entire tribe as allies to
| ivanganev1992 chapter 15 . 8/25/2014
I am so happy with the happy end . I little wonder from what will be used the half scull but it will be better than doing evil things rotting feeding evil and good monsters .
Is it possible to be build a house from the scull ?!
Healing whatever it is better than nothing and scaring the nice flying and landet souls who knows her or just seing her remains .
| ivanganev1992 chapter 8 . 8/25/2014
Han got the same wind of change if Hic try to show him . Han reminds me the kinder version of Gobber .
Ok for response here is my post :
| ivanganev1992 chapter 6 . 8/24/2014
Will Hic now try to learn draconese to talk with his friend . Well I'll see later . For response here is my post :