Reviews for Untold Things
Shijaeger chapter 1 . 9/11/2017
The feels ...
Sarah chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
This is perfect. I have no other words to describe it.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
Could you write a fanfiction when they are at Sensei hawk eyes place and roy messes up and has to sleep outside and riza stays out to make sure he doesn't freeze to death
Anon chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
asdghjsagl why must everything you write be so perfect?
Poetrygirl21 chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
This was really well written! I loved how you potrayed Scar.
jessi chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Excellent story!
TheSilverGunAlchemist chapter 1 . 3/27/2012

Like ALL your story's IT'S AMAZING!

Your amazing :)
cheesyteal'c chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
ed you should know by now life or death situations lead to heated make outs duh
Ramen Time chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
god how i wish this would have

actually happened in the damn

manga! lol i loved it, could totally

picture it happening. _ oh how

i just wish that arakawa could have

pictured this too *sighs*
Blaze Alchemist chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
I Awed out loud, I absolutely love it!
Anon chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
This is very well written.
EmilyLTeague chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Really good I liked it!
2artemis2 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
aww, that was so sweet!
Shikabane-Mai chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Wow, I loved this!

Scar sure had some great lines of insight here. I especially loved this one: "A weakness can become a person's strength. He'll fight to stay alive and to keep her alive, because she's the source of his enduringness as well. Like that girl and your brother are for you."

It's so sweet and so true, because Riza is Roy's biggest strength AND weakness. 3
Stonefeather chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Yay! This is exactly how I wish things would have happened in the manga! Thank you for writing this, it was a pleasure to read.
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