|Reviews for Heed the Siren's Call|
| DarkForestWolf chapter 16 . 3/12
O MY GOSH! IT TOOK ME DAYS TO FINISH THIS, AND I CAN'T GET OVER THE FACT ON HOW MUCH I LOVE IT! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! I thought I was the only Shanks X Makino fan! KEEP UP THE FANTASTIC WORK BTW! XD
| MelfinaPan chapter 16 . 3/9
This is quite possibly the best ShanksxMakino fic in existance. So well written and the characterizations are wonderful. I'm so glad you kept going with it!
| venusviola chapter 16 . 3/10
I'm SO happy you're going to write more for this pairing! Personally, I would like to read something that's outside this storyverse but still takes place in the OP world (not an AU). A story post-3D2Y or set during the time-skip would be perfect. (Also, I'd like to see more of characters connected to either Shanks or Makino like Mihawk, Dadan or Garp!) But really, your stories are so amazing I'll definitely love everything you write, as long as it's about these two :)
| hexgirl13 chapter 16 . 3/8
I love your story! loving the conversations between ben and shanks! I am soo looking forward to seeing another story about them from you!
I would love to know about their relashionship after the time skip with the baby and whether makino stays on land or goes with shanks.
| Iris chapter 16 . 3/4
OH MY GOSHNESS!1 thanks so much for updating, i honestly to every god under and above the sun love your stories. me, im all for namixluffy. yeah, predictable and over-used, but i love them and in the sense of a fangirl, i love you too, so please, gimme gimme :):):):):)
| ArisuCelayita chapter 16 . 3/6
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| totallycrazy chapter 16 . 3/5
Yeeah next chapter like promised...but noooooo don't let me hanging...I need the reunion, I need it . ! I loved hearing about Emiko and Jirou even though it's very sad that they did not end up together. But for Makino and Shanks it will be different, it just has to be.
I am sooo happy that you want to continue writing about them. I would love to hear more about their life after the epilogue, and everything with Shanks, Makino and the Baby would be absolutely wonderful. Maybe about the baby growing up and the further developement of their relationship. Would Shanks stay or visit in between or will Makino and the baby join the Crew. There are just so many possibilities. And ooh Shanks and a baby, it's just soo adorable in my head.
I am so looking forward to the next chapter, please,please,please don't make me wait long!
| Princess-Orlaith chapter 16 . 3/4
Oooh I'd like an AU or actually no beacause I adore this setting and age. Perhaps snippets and drabbles then. It's reallt up to you though. You could maybe make a giant ficlet with oneshots, drabbles and like mini fics with a few chapters the afterstories of this scattered here and there. Make them angsty if u can! ;
I adore little backstories and pieces of info from more lowly pirates. Because people forget their significance in pirating or "passion" as I might say. And look at me, I'm here stnading up for an OC pirate crew.
Another thing I adore about this fic is how you display love. Like even the fierecest, harshest chracters had found love that they seriously held on till death to.
Eheheh he rhymed :D Sweet so this Yu guy can somewhat sense character. I bet the stories will be exactly like Makino but farther ahead in relationships.
So theres there are two ways to hug. One ehere you hook your arms under like Makino or hug the neck area on top. I would say the first one is a deeper/truer hug and the second one is more brief. Not sure why I specified this haha.
OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU MUNGOE FOR ADDING THE TIMESKIP RIGHT IN THIS CHAPTER! WHOA THATS RIGHT SHANKS STOPPED THE WAR OMF... :D
Ah Shanks... ;_; He'll never stop seeing those pieces eh? Thats what all happy people are. Tainted with hurt underneath. The scariest one to me was Koala in the flashback of the Sun fishman Pirates. She was stuck in that creepy smile, forever scarred. ;_;
Lord help me I adore Ben and Shanks. You are incredible at wording the dialogue to thenultimate battle of wits. Like seriously everything is smooth af XD I wish there was a "Like/Enjoyed Alot" option instead of just favourites. Because there are ones i really liked, then theres THE ones I really liked. :3
My god Ace! ;_; Bitch went and died. Rip his blazin soul (heh). Wouldn't he be rather protective over Makino haha? I suppose notz makes me happy he told Shanks. Means he visits her often :):):):):) but speaking of Makino. Isn't she lonely af? Not having Luffy or Ace to cause her daily ruckus that brighten things up, awaiting a far away lover and living alone on a tiny blank island. Makes me depressssed.
I hope Garp only beats up shanks and drink sith him afterwards and shanks would sneak away before garp could catch him. But scratch the last part because he's going to stay with Makinooo
But this chapter (or the part about garp) really hit close to home. My grandpa and I used to be close but now hes a senile old man, can't say I don't miss those times! Really touching relationship :') might as well say a perfect chapter. Like seriously. I'm dazzled by the aonders of poetic (nearly) storywriting. Gosh fanfiction is home to so many brilliant writers. If only they all got noticed. I'm going to round up together my ABSOLUTE ADORATIONS in an archive on here. All fics about anime but guarantee yours will be there :)
PS: Sorry for the crazy long review but I had alot to say from this chapter.. I'll be awaiting
| Aki-Whose name has been stolen chapter 16 . 3/4
Awwww mannnn! Cliff hanger!
I want to see more of the crew after Makino joins! A meeting between Garp and the crew so that Garp can chew out Shanks for leaving her in the first place!
Ohhh and Makino's meeting with Mihawk as well maybe! After all, one should always know when one's rival settles down. :D
Please update soon! I couldn't bear to simply read one chapter and ended up re-reading the entire story again.
Please also let me know if there are anymore well written fics out there in One Piece. I don't mind the characters as long as its well written.
| anniewanny2 chapter 16 . 3/4
I'm glad you're planning on writing more about these two. it would be interesting to see how they both dealt with the separation, I so enjoyed the banter between Shanks and Ben so I'd love to read more of that. Although another story altogether would be interesting as well, what ever you chose I'm confident it'll be equally brilliant as your previous creations have been. I'm so relieved you're planning on continuing writing about this pairing! Like you mentionned in this chapter a good story always leaves you with a feeling of melancholy at the end but it is somewhat remedied with the prospects of a sequel :)
| mei4 chapter 16 . 3/4
Just found this story, so happy I did. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
| viv-heart chapter 16 . 3/4
The way you write Ben is really enjoyable. Him being so sassy towards Shanks is one of my favourite things :)
Looking forward to the Eplogue
And to your question: something with Shanks and Makino intrraction is always great. :)
| pia.97 chapter 16 . 3/4
Again, amazing! I was so happy when I saw that the next chapter was updated, and it is so cute! At first I thought only the epilogue would be ten years later, but then I saw and read the time skip and I couldn't stop smiling! So cute! The time until the next chapter will be used to read the story again… and again probably, because I won't be able to stop! I can't wait!
And to leave an answer to your question, I would be happy with every story you write about this pairing, but the snippets of their life would be a great start! And some drabbles about their life during the time skip would be great too. Everything you write is great, so it doesn't exactly matter to me!
| Magic Morgana chapter 16 . 3/4
That was just so beautiful. Thank you. And as I just hope it is their baby ... I kinda don't believe it. I mean ... after the war it was quite busy and Shanks would have to fight and protect his territory :-/ You see how twisted I am here? Between heart (about Shanks and Makino having a baby) and my brain telling me otherwise?
Read ya soon :-)
| Fist.Of.Fire chapter 16 . 3/3
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW! Crazyyyyyyyy! Awesome! I am so freaaakkkkiiinggg excited for the reunion!
And please do make another story of this lovely pair. I would be happy with whatever you choose to write. I trust you! ;)