Reviews for Mystery Girl
SarcasmIsMyBestFriend chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
slightly odd beginning but the rest was really good you got it perfectly, hope to see more one-shots from you really good
Luvtowritefics247 chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
cute one shot! you had me at "A couple of dates looked up as he stumbled into the hallway. "It's, uh, going pretty nice back there in Narnia," " i cracked up over that, it was well executed. i think i'm going to use that if i ever stumble awkwardly out of a closet now.

i thought you kepts it all nicely in character, and it was funny and cute. great job!
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