Reviews for Meeting Nanoha
HyperCatnip chapter 7 . 5/16
It began okay, it had some great moments in the middle, there was some fun, but chapters 6 and 7 are not engaging. I have no idea why, I just didn't like them, earlier chapters were much better.

Overall, this is an okay loops spinoff, but it did not manage to exceed the original loops.
Nainai chapter 6 . 11/5/2014
Ugh. Hmm... trash... but not quite. How about a doodle. Yeah... this doesn't have substance at all. And it feels like you just rambling with no direction...
Nainai chapter 3 . 11/5/2014
Its the squick factor of nanohaverse. You become a pedo.
Guest chapter 7 . 10/12/2014
"We loose more doors that way." You want 'lose' here.
"want her to have no excuese for losing" excuse
Cranagan or Crannagan? At least one each this chapter.
Guest chapter 6 . 10/11/2014
"The Gadgets destroyed the breaking system" braking
"She rather unashamedly groping Fate" she WAS rather...
Guest chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
"significant difference in loosing a parent, as "Ranma Scrya" had, and loosing a spouse" losing, both times.
"hurting from loosing your mother" and again should be losing
"They get declared rouge when that happens." You mean rogue.
Firehedgehog chapter 7 . 10/13/2014
and heres hoping for more, just discovered this
jaelin910 chapter 3 . 2/28/2013
poor librarian...
jaelin910 chapter 2 . 2/28/2013
freezing the world would be a pretty impressive demonstration of power. making the sun go supernova (for example) might be more difficult, but it's a fairly long way away...
Hiryo chapter 7 . 6/25/2012
Please update soon that amazing story of yours!
Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
steakforest chapter 6 . 5/17/2012
I'm still reading it, so that's good.

I have but two complaints:

1. At times your writing can be a bit disjointed, you constantly jump around.

2. This story is difficult to follow for someone who doesn't know Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha well.

Honestly though, number two is hardly your fault at all and I wouldn't ask you to change it. I'm simply saying that because I don't know the story well, I often times get lost with what is happening.

Also, I feel like 1 wouldn't be as much of an issue if 2 wasn't either, it would be easier to follow.

What this means?

Your story is fine, I just can't follow everything because I don't know canon so well.

Yeah, so good job.
NovaBladeZ chapter 7 . 4/27/2012
Sweet, another chapter. I love this story. It takes the great concept of Innortal's Time Loops and actually does something with it. I mean, I do like the snippets that people write for the Time Loops, but them I'm like, "...and then?". Reading them is like watching a movie preview for a movie that will never come out. Irritating as hell because the situations they portray is actually really interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Nanya chapter 7 . 4/26/2012
I remember this story. Nice to see that it's up here now.

What? No love for what Lilith did to Chrono? :P
dragooner chapter 7 . 4/25/2012
yay new chapter now it's just to wait for innortal to post more :D
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