Reviews for Avatar Drabbles: Book 4 & Beyond
ArrayePL chapter 6 . 4/17/2010
This was hilarious. I laughed so hard when I read the last sentence.
BillA1 chapter 4 . 4/11/2010
I continue to be amazed by your ability to master the difficulty of writing drabbles (100 word stories). Your small tales are thought provoking and capture snippets in the lives of these characters very well. I enjoy reading them and hope you don't stop writing in this artform. Bill
gretlcascade chapter 3 . 4/10/2010
haha. celestial justice. this is cute :)
Sun Daughter chapter 4 . 4/10/2010
Uhm, well these are clever. I'll give you that. It's a nice idea and I give you a B on creativity. Your spelling and grammar was good as well.

As for everything else, it's way too short. First, it only has around 450 words which is less than average for ONE chapter, and I can see the "Review" button as soon as I open your chapter which is never a good sign.

Other than that, it was pretty good. Expand with a little more use of detail though! Or if all else fails, just combine a few into one chapter and make a one-shot :)

Keep writing and have a nice day.

Blood Red Chaos chapter 2 . 4/4/2010
oh WoW I didn't know you did avatar stuff! I so want to know what happens with toph and her mom and dad. love it! But don't forget gargoyles, I get so happy when i check my mail and it has an update from you! Sque
Storyseeker chapter 2 . 4/3/2010
Nicely written short stories!
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