Don't do it 'Mione! Don't marry him! Man, this is awsome, I can't wait for more.

Wow... I mean you're so good - their personalities, their manners I love how you can keep them constant. As well, I admire how intelligent and strong they all are, Hermione is smart, but as a woman she's too sentimental (I guess you can say) and so she still has a soft spot for Tom. I suspect she's too forgiving or compassionate. As for Draco, he grew better; out of all the men in the room he's truly sincere and good at heart. And I was impress that he can stand as an equal amongst the leaders. Antoine is an interesting character, he's deceptive; although he's seems more to be the type to have an empty heart more so than evil. Maybe a lack of conscience or morals kind of thing. And Tom, I mean how twisted can he get? Like he can be manipulative, charming, polite, cruel, and he loves Hermione in his own sick way...

wow

And actually from that painting Hermione saw, I thought that was a foreshadowing that she'll end up with Draco. Merlin's implication is another hint. I think goodness should conquer all, at the same time I believe it can only be Hermione who can kill Tom (that sort of thing). Anyways, update soon! I'm so addicted to how this will turn out!

So not the twist I expected. Great job! . I'm still loving it!

Wow this is amazing! i read all the twelve chapters you have published in around, i am guessing, 40 minutes, maybe an hour. I love it. the cahracters are really well written. there is not a moment where it is not interesting and suspense full. Update soon. Completely amazing!

great chapter update soon.

I love this story!I'm sorry it took me a while to review! Bu tI really do love this, I can't wait to read more! Updtae soon please!

Wow... before I read further I have to say this is so good; so interesting and captivating and wow your character's are so realistic and more constant

Wow, this story is just beyond incredible! I found it last night, read it right up until I was bound to die of exhaustion, and then finished it today. The way you portray Hermione and Tom's relationship is just so...well, incredible! Rarely do I find a story, especially in the Harry Potter category, that can leave me at a loss for words, but by Merlin you've done it! You have such an attention to detail that many HP stories lack nowadays. Also, the progression of Tom and Hermione's relationship just leaves me so eager to see what's going to happen between them next, because with a sociopath, you really never know what you're going to get. You've so masterfully written just how a person in Tom's mental state would react to love, becoming extremely irrational, yet expecting nothing but devotion in return.

I really hope you end up addressing Tom and Bellatrix's relationship from Hermione's eyes more closely, because frankly if I were in her shoes, I would be extremely angry and jealous if the man I was in love with had taken on a lover in the midst of all this madness. Especially after everything he had subjected me to "in the name of love". I cannot wait until you update, which I hope will be really soon. Again, you've done such an amazing job and I desperately hope you see this story through until it's completion, which hopefully won't be any time soon :D

Thank you for the update it is greatly appreciated. Surely if when Hermione deflected the spell that was cast at Draco that counted as using magic.. But nevermind me I'm just enjoying reading this! I hope that you countinue to enjoy writing this story as I know I will continue to enjoy reading it!

nice! cant wait for the dinner chapter :D

please update soon!

please update soon this is just brilliant and i love how its nnot all fluffy type love but has a dark side!

Wow I just found this and I think it's amazing! Plz update soon! xxxx

awesome chapter

I really love it! I love Tom and Hermione's relationship. I noticed that you kept misspelling veela "velaa" or "vela". Or are you talking about a different creature? I'm sorry if I'm mistaking. Please update soon! I love it so much!

Wow, and Hermione's pregnant with Harry's kid? While the Harmony fan in me loves this I can also see a bit of Dramione going on, and this is a Tomione story. It's tearing me apart because I love them all.

I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it's soon. I love your wrighting, keep it up.