great story.

Nice chapter. I feel worst for Harry.

luv it! where's the next chapters? dying to know what happens _

Poor Hermione. I wish you would continue this.

very good chapter

end was very goo

You should make this into a multi-chapter story. It'd be really interesting :)

love it xD

wow, its kind of creepy. I like it!

Cool, an interesting read. You should think about writing a sequel! It was a little hard to understand sometimes though, like I was confused as to how Hermione escaped, and how she went to the past in the first place. But I thought Tom/Voldemort was very in character! And the overall feel of the fic was dark, mysterious and bittersweet. Very nice! :D

gawd i love this kind of stuff!dark yet lovely...

i love the way the story went

This was really great! :) Tom's character is so in place. :D Great job. :)

~A.

Wow, this little one-shot has potential. Have you thought about expanding it? I think it would make for a decent story. Just a tip, your writing style is really good, but you may want to find a beta before posting. The have great betas over at Perfect .