Reviews for Mistakes
Leelee87 chapter 5 . 5/6/2013
You need a beta, and you need to edit the first few chapters here. Too many discrepancies and grammatical errors keep me from liking this story.
Aristocratic Assassin chapter 22 . 5/5/2013
Great story and chapter! I am really enjoying this so keep up the awesome work and I'll be watching out for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 22 . 5/4/2013
With a ending like that I hope another update will happen soon. Glad to have you writing again. This story has always been one of my favorite tom/hermione.
gleeislove chapter 22 . 5/4/2013
I have loved being apart of this crazy adventure, two chapters at once was a wonderful way to start my day. I hope that you are able to finish this story this year, but if not I will wait. I'm super curious as to what her wands core is and what is in that room!
nattiy chapter 22 . 5/4/2013
I hate the situation you have put me in, I am as of now, obssessed with this story. Please update soon! Love it! :)
Anon chapter 22 . 5/4/2013
I never thought I'd start reading this again, and get into it after so long, but I was wrong. Please keep going. This chapter was great
isabel.izaguirre93 chapter 22 . 5/4/2013
what happen!
oh cliff hanger!
lalyta8 chapter 22 . 5/4/2013
looove. looved. cant wait for more
Vaneesa85 chapter 21 . 5/3/2013
UGh Loving it
nattiy chapter 21 . 5/1/2013
I can't wait to konw what that potion was! I love this story, keep going!
Rinou chapter 21 . 4/30/2013
...Intriguing story so far! Well written, that is to say.. Sometimes a little complicated to grasp everything you're offering us (as for the different informations and manipulations) but it's fascinating to see where you're leading us! Keep going! I'm looking forwards the next chapters!
zypherblaze chapter 21 . 4/30/2013
I love this chapter! I wonder what Tom gave Hermione? For a second there I thought it was her magic. Anyway I hope we see more of that in the next chapter and that Hermione does get her magic back soon. This story is wonderful and I can't wait to see where else it will take us. Thank you!
Guest chapter 21 . 4/30/2013
Amazing chapter. I really loved it.
nattiy chapter 20 . 4/29/2013
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gleeislove chapter 20 . 4/29/2013
Thank you so much for updating!
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