Reviews for Mistakes
Dark Roses chapter 4 . 4/10/2013
I absolutely love your story; I have read and re-read it so many times and it just suddenly occurred to me that I have never left a review.
I really love the way you have portrayed Tom and Hermione's relationship, and also the character of Draco; for once he is not so much of a coward.
However, I hate and was sort of upset at reading about Harry Potter. I hate what he had become; how easily he had left the wizarding world and his best friend. He was kind of brave at the end, near his death, but I don't think it makes up for his mistake and I was hardly moved by it.
Overall, this is one of my favourite stories and I really hope you find time to finish it.
Best Wishes for your future writing. Xxx
Mangamolly1991 chapter 19 . 3/24/2013
I find this story fantastic. I know that you probably have other things going on with your life, but when you can, please continue this story.
Vaneesa85 chapter 19 . 1/30/2013
Loving it hopefully she ends up with draco in the end.
Blueberrysweetheart chapter 19 . 1/27/2013
I have a question? Is this story a sequel? I just wonder if it is so, I read the first story :) I really love this It's actually the first TomXHermione Fanfic I've ever read :)
gleeislove chapter 19 . 1/7/2013
Thank you so much for updating again so quickly! I adore this story and your writing!
followsrabbit chapter 19 . 1/7/2013
I love this story so much! You write Tom and Hermione perfectly. Their dialogue is amazing :)
Themelissa11111 chapter 19 . 1/7/2013
No! Cliffhanger update ASAP
callalily32 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
wow. such a good beginning. I generally don't like first-person fics... but I'll have to give this one a shot! :)
Reggaddnakaolc chapter 18 . 1/1/2013
This story is soooo sadistic and wrong, on so many levels. In short, I love it! I can honestly say, I have never been more stumped into how this is all going to turn out. I mean on the one hand, I want Hermione to really outsmart dearest Voldy and save the wizarding world, but I (sniff) don't want to see Draco tragically die in the process. She'd be so alone, besides her baby assuming he/she would live. On the other, there's something about Tom thats so profoundly...sad. He's evil yea, but the way that you've written him, sometimes I catch myself feeling for him and wanting her to be with him, but without compromising everything that makes her Hermione. This story is really amazing and keeps me thinking. I sincerely hope you complete this story, its fantastic.
icecreamy chapter 18 . 1/1/2013
What a complete a-hole that Tom is
Yui chapter 8 . 12/30/2012
This is badly written!
LabsByEerie chapter 18 . 12/29/2012
another good chapter :)
gleeislove chapter 18 . 12/28/2012
Thank you so much for updating this story, it was a wonderful holiday gift! Happy Holidays!
double r starr chapter 18 . 12/28/2012
that was just cruel at the end...i like it
Smiling-Eyes11 chapter 17 . 11/25/2012
Please continue soon... i'm already at the edge of my seat.. such an interesting story, can't wait for your next update :)
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