Reviews for Mistakes |
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![]() ![]() I absolutely love your story; I have read and re-read it so many times and it just suddenly occurred to me that I have never left a review. I really love the way you have portrayed Tom and Hermione's relationship, and also the character of Draco; for once he is not so much of a coward. However, I hate and was sort of upset at reading about Harry Potter. I hate what he had become; how easily he had left the wizarding world and his best friend. He was kind of brave at the end, near his death, but I don't think it makes up for his mistake and I was hardly moved by it. Overall, this is one of my favourite stories and I really hope you find time to finish it. Best Wishes for your future writing. Xxx |
![]() ![]() I find this story fantastic. I know that you probably have other things going on with your life, but when you can, please continue this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving it hopefully she ends up with draco in the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have a question? Is this story a sequel? I just wonder if it is so, I read the first story :) I really love this It's actually the first TomXHermione Fanfic I've ever read :) |
![]() ![]() Thank you so much for updating again so quickly! I adore this story and your writing! |
![]() ![]() I love this story so much! You write Tom and Hermione perfectly. Their dialogue is amazing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() No! Cliffhanger update ASAP |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. such a good beginning. I generally don't like first-person fics... but I'll have to give this one a shot! :) |
![]() ![]() This story is soooo sadistic and wrong, on so many levels. In short, I love it! I can honestly say, I have never been more stumped into how this is all going to turn out. I mean on the one hand, I want Hermione to really outsmart dearest Voldy and save the wizarding world, but I (sniff) don't want to see Draco tragically die in the process. She'd be so alone, besides her baby assuming he/she would live. On the other, there's something about Tom thats so profoundly...sad. He's evil yea, but the way that you've written him, sometimes I catch myself feeling for him and wanting her to be with him, but without compromising everything that makes her Hermione. This story is really amazing and keeps me thinking. I sincerely hope you complete this story, its fantastic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a complete a-hole that Tom is |
![]() ![]() This is badly written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() another good chapter :) |
![]() ![]() Thank you so much for updating this story, it was a wonderful holiday gift! Happy Holidays! |
![]() ![]() that was just cruel at the end...i like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue soon... i'm already at the edge of my seat.. such an interesting story, can't wait for your next update :) |