Reviews for Mistakes
sports7 chapter 17 . 11/18/2012
Hello! I quite enjoy this story (immensely). I know it's been a year since you last updated but I would LOVE it if you updated! Your story is so complex and I thought Antoine was such a funny character! I sincerely hope you continue this story.
miss.jenny.lovey.dovey chapter 17 . 10/25/2012
Wow you updated!(: I forgot how even Harry died soo I'll have to do some rereading
zypherblaze chapter 17 . 10/23/2012
I loved it! So interesting and once again your writing is lovely. I really hope you update soon.
DiamondEnchantress chapter 17 . 10/23/2012
yeah new chapter im so glad you started again
Double R Starr chapter 17 . 10/23/2012
Awh that was such a cute gift
gleeislove chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Hi again, I just wanted to leave another note letting you know how much I adore this story. It's terribly selfish of me to say this but I hope you update soon so I can be relieved of my suspense.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Hi this is gleeislove and I have loved this story for months. Although I usually don't like Tom and Draco to be Hermiones love interests in the same story, how you've written makes it impossible to stop reading. I'm sad to see that it appears you have lost your muse for this fic or that RL is making things difficult. I hope everything works out for you and when I randomly reread this before you update again i'll try to leave a review or two to let you know how much I adore this.
HappyCup chapter 16 . 4/4/2012
That was awesome. This is such an original story; I love it. I do see the need for a Beta. It's almost impossible to adequately proofread your own work because you can't help but see what you intended rather than what's really there. Usually editting errors turn me off of a story, but I'm so glad that I continued reading this one. I hope you continue writing it.
Naia chapter 16 . 3/26/2012
Marvellous, really. Your writing is delightfully fluent and full of twists and turns, that one couldn't help but be mesmerised. It compels people to keep on reading and puts us at the edge of our seat. Your style is clean-cut and simple. That makes it easier for us to grasp the deeply thought out plot-lines. And believe it or not, the simpleness of it conveys emotions of the characters in perfect clarity. I applaud you for handling the delicate love/hate relationship so well, without turning to be some ridiculous sap, and for keeping the players so much in character. And most importantly, you made the characters alive. They feel so real to me.

A real gem, this is. I hope you will continue the story until the very end. You have my support. I will be waiting patiently for the next instalments...
DirtyLittleTruth chapter 16 . 3/15/2012
I love your writing style. Very fluid and too the point. I like how you do not spend too much time of one thing, or just love scenes, and instead focus on the plot as a whole.I think it is very effective in showing the love/hate dilemma playing between Hermione and Tom.
ImDiffrentSoWhat chapter 16 . 2/29/2012
That was deep but a good death fitting Harry's bravery. I can't wait for more. I feel the angst.
who-needs-a-hero12 chapter 16 . 2/21/2012
Just started reading this today- it's truly addictive! Couldn't put my phone down until I finished the newest chapter! As I read further, your writing sucks me into it's elaborate labyrinth. Find myself mesmerized by the twists and turns if this maze. Please update soon!
darrling chapter 16 . 2/17/2012
crap, you're amazing! keep writing!
luvslinkpk88 chapter 16 . 2/14/2012
Absolutely love your story. This is by far my favorite Hermione/Tom R JR. story. Please continue as soon as possible
CorruptedHerMind chapter 16 . 2/8/2012
Fucking brilliant.
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