Reviews for Control
fatandsquat chapter 9 . 3/21/2022
Wohoo self harm is so cool, only pussies go to the hospital wing amirite?
Sir Dedrick the Cool chapter 1 . 3/15/2022
The sheer edge.
John Ciaccio chapter 11 . 3/9/2022
I wish you had finished, I really liked your take on the characters. Thanks for sharing what you wrote
muffdyvr chapter 7 . 3/8/2022
this is the first weak ass useless dark harry fic I've come across.
I thought he wasn't going to let anyone control him... yet let's everyone control him.
muffdyvr chapter 4 . 3/8/2022
how many prologues does a story need,
I'm already bored
SpeedyServel chapter 11 . 3/3/2022
is this the end! Dx please say you'll be doing more! this story is incredible! 3
Bluenait chapter 4 . 3/2/2022
Trash fic how Stupid is he . (I will not be controlled again) says Harry then comes Dumbels and says (Hey Herry wanna be my Bitch again ?) Harry (Sure)
acetwolf94 chapter 11 . 2/10/2022
Guest chapter 11 . 11/23/2021
Your Harry is really stupid, spineless and pathetic. Just like the writer I imagine.
MirrRistalnce chapter 4 . 10/7/2021
I am a lot of years late to this, but I started reading this several years ago, and spent probably 3 hours looking for this, this morning. It was entirely worth it, because it is just as interesting and well written as I remember. If the author even checks these reviews anymore, thank you, genuinely thank you.
ironhair chapter 11 . 9/25/2021
Well, thank you for writing so far.
Hope you do add a go so chapter concluding what you meant to do with this.
ironhair chapter 1 . 9/23/2021
Reading. Wow.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/16/2021
This is trash
jaqmaq77 chapter 10 . 6/20/2021
I can't believe Harry was that stupid again... I mean he did the same beyond stupid stuff again... I thought when he did it all the second time he would have been more careful... but every time I read a chapter I can't believe he can be so stupid a second time... But as they say, Those who can't remember the past are doomed forever to repeat it...
I think he should just cut his own throat and be done with the suicide... guy who wants to die that badly should just do it - my review of the last chapter the last time I read this says it all... Harry is a walk-off... you know - God had the souls lined up ready to get a brain and some of them walked off... Harry is a definite walk-off... You shine a light in his ear his eyes sparkle... the cheese has slid off the cracker... to confuse Harry you show him two shovels and tell him to take his pick... he thinks the London Underground is a political movement... he sat in the kitchen staring at a bottle of orange because it said concentrate... Harry used a computer to write a letter... you know it was Harry because of the Tipex... you know he did it twice because of the writing on the Tipex... His girlfriend had twins and Harry went out looking for the other guy...
jaqmaq77 chapter 8 . 6/20/2021
Somehow I'm glad this is unfinished... Because if Harry becomes more of a prick than he is at this point, if they circumcised him, it would weigh half a ton... and a Slytherin? I don't think so... at this point he comes across as thicker than Ron Weasley's kid when Ron mated with a female Goyle...
Come on... if his behaviour gets any more Gryffindor he'll have to request resorting... But I think I get it - the Dementor missed his soul and sucked out the tiny bit of common sense he started with and left a walking arsehole...
And Tracy? What the hell? Does her brain work at all? What's her next brain fart - walking into a room full of Death Eaters naked, announcing she's a half-blood and asking how many girls they have raped? Does she ever switch her brain on before she puts her mouth in gear?
Still, it is an interesting story... it's annoying enough to keep you interested...
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