Reviews for Control
Valkorion510 chapter 4 . 3/27/2021
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Urgazhi chapter 11 . 3/20/2021
This is fantastically written. It seems to me like Harry is slowly starting to become a wharton. Probably because of the exposure to the rosary. I'm kind of disappointed that this seems to have been abandoned.
Guest chapter 11 . 1/20/2021
I hope Dumbledore’s sister got raped like a squealing pigsow. Fuck Dumbledore.
Signal Lost chapter 11 . 1/18/2021
More? Maybe? I mean it's only been a little over nine years.
Guest chapter 8 . 12/21/2020
Hate the 1st person bullshit but just too good to drop i am getting giga cancer if it wasnt for aids pov i would be jerking my cock
Kohlrabiz chapter 6 . 12/15/2020
Last read.
Eragon135790 chapter 11 . 11/13/2020
great great great ff. still hoping that it could be continued.
Last Harper chapter 11 . 11/8/2020
I would have Harry, write Tonks a letter breaking off all relations. While explaining that as a pawn of she was no longer an ally and hence unprotected.
Phildora chapter 11 . 10/14/2020
This was one of the best fanfics I've ever read. I don't care how many fucking years its been, if the author uploads the next chapter ten years later, then I'll read it 10 years later. I swear on my magic.
Phildora chapter 3 . 10/14/2020
This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. Damn
jaqmaq77 chapter 11 . 10/7/2020
I must have read a few thousand HP stories but never have I read a story where Harry was a bigger Arsehole... You have taken the concept of his 'I'm Fine' mentality and stretched it to Pluto and returned via the M31 Galaxy... Oh don't get me wrong - I was enjoying it to a degree... but as I said, I have read God Harry, and Super Harry... but none have ever come so close to SPPP... (Sad, Poor Pathetic Potty)...
I'm waiting for him to hide in the corner and weep for his Mummy... If your intention was to make him a Pathetic sad 'I Don't Need Anyone' character... You did it, and then some...
But... I am still hoping you write more - but I really, for once... Don't have a clue where you are going... I don't think I could follow you down a country lane after a fresh snowfall... I hope you write an end one day...
I will go back and read it again... and I do think I can see how you end it... Harry Steals a Nuclear device and after super-charging it, sets it to blow in five minutes - then he slits his wrists... and waits while thinking how horrible his life was... and how the rest of the world just doesn't understand... "Oh, woe is me, die world, die!"
Sorry... my bad... But he really is and annoying dick! Oh, and I love how annoying your Tracy is... I was surprised she was such a mouthy Bit... I loved it...she should a been a Gryiffindor... can you picture Ron and Tracy... "Oh Ron look - there's that guy who murdered three muggles and an Auror... lets piss him off..." "Great idea Trace... whats he gonna do, kill us?"
Guest chapter 11 . 9/26/2020
Contact me on fiverr. I can help you complete this. Silverlight001
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