Reviews for Carried Off
fellow chapter 4 . 6/15/2014
Nice.
Twilight-Lloyd chapter 2 . 2/1/2014
The most badass house-husband in all existence. Let's see the iron chef contestants do that.
Feng Lengshun chapter 4 . 9/5/2013
So, someone recommended this to me and really, I'm not impressed with it. The basics of romance was creating a problem, something to stand between the couple going together. There was a problem presented, but it was not elaborated. It was just suddenly solved. Ranma's Stockholm Syndrome was also not very believable. Simply put, it was just there to help them become together, not to work trying to separate them, which is the basic of Romance really.

Basically, it was forced, solved too easily, and not to mention that it was padded. Contest or not, it was not a good writing. If you need 15k amount of words, then put in a story with stuffs actually amounting to 15k words instead of padding something that could be told in half or less.

Also, the Suika is way too OOC. Yuugi would be a much better choice here. Subterranean Animism was released in 2008 so you could have used her. On the note of OOC-ness, read the actual transcript and Aya's Interview, or what the Touhou Community of deviantART would call as 'the Guide'.

Overall, not that good. And I have a feeling that the sequel might be him becoming a Gappy Stu of some sort...
Veedramon chapter 4 . 8/26/2013
Well, interesting way to end the fight...
Veedramon chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
I can totally buy Happosai- being a youkai, it just fits.
Veedramon chapter 2 . 8/26/2013
Suika may end being better than Akane... even if she hurts him way more.
Veedramon chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Well, Ranma is in big trouble...
Treant Balewood chapter 4 . 4/30/2013
I really enjoyed this thanks for writing.
irnzenmonk chapter 4 . 3/17/2013
good story ne
darkwoofe chapter 4 . 9/24/2012
Loved this one! Really enjoyed reading it all and now I'm about to start on the sequel. Nicely done...
chronodekar chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
I don't really know much about Suika, but you've written enough for me to guess.

Nice and funny this one.

A bit off and odd, but work-able. Oh, did I say silly?

-chronodekar
Hanzo of the Salamander 2.0 chapter 4 . 8/28/2011
I look forward to reading what happens next in your story
authority02 chapter 4 . 7/29/2011
I heard you like tvtropes, so I made a tvtropes entry for you so you can trope while you trope.

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Wimp chapter 2 . 6/24/2011
Seriously, it's like this in every story. Your hero gets owned by a girl, and he always seems to be into S&M. Can't your hero ever be top dog? Must he always be so hopelessly far behind a woman that he could never catch up? And worst of all, does he have to enjoy being that far behind and letting the woman dominate him?

Your heroes never seem to put up a fight. It gets sort of annoying to me I guess. Eh, I'll still read what you've written so oh well.
Savaris chapter 4 . 6/8/2011
Whoa, dark. However, I can definitely see the ol' ghoul pull something like that... You just can't live that long and not turn out ruthless in the end... Well, can't wait to start on the sequel! I hope those three dumbasses pay dearly. Mousse and Kuno are the characters I really wanted to be given a dirtnap, they are by far some of the most I've found irksome. Ryouga is also one to a lesser extent, cause he has some leeway with him meaning well but is hampered by constantly misunderstanding things like, no, as the idiot he is.
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