|Reviews for Brothers United|
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/12
That was the best story ever
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/8/2015
Nice touch bringing Theseus into it
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/10/2015
In the Last Olympian, it said that Triton had two fishtails, so how can he walk? It's confusing but it's still an awesome story
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/10/2015
I'm taking a wild guess without reading the next chapter. Theseus is the Son of Poseidon Athena fell in love with?
| Megatherium chapter 2 . 9/12/2014
fuck balls is every one bipolar?
| AngelEyes1864 chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
The prophecy was actually really good. I've read many fanfics that have really crappy prophecies but this one is good ;))
| Stormwatcher 25 chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
Nice first chapter. Although i don't think the cave would be there right after the prophecy. I mean it was only an idea by apollo at first.
| Izzybella12 chapter 10 . 2/6/2014
Awesome story! Virtual cookie!(::)3
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/7/2014
I'm sure this is a lovely story, but the terrible grammar- spelling, punctuation, etc.- is making me go "fuck this shit", turn around, and get the hell out of reading this. Also, some of the phrasing choices are cringe-worthy.
| x-rayLady chapter 10 . 11/9/2013
Your writing improved a lot over time, I see. Your next works are written much better. In this one the story is too rushed and the narrative is not as good as in your later works either.
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/22/2013
not to be a jerk, but your current wrighting is WAY better than this, but hey everyone needs a start right?
| ShadowFireHime-Sama chapter 10 . 9/8/2013
AWESOME STORY _
| InflatedChimp chapter 10 . 7/28/2013
Great intro story, I look forward to enjoy the rest :)
| InflatedChimp chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Generally I don't even bother with fics less than 60,000 words as I find that they lack depth, but you got recommended by Anaklusmos14 a few times so I thought I'd give you a try especially after seeing how you've split a the story.
| prmehta24 chapter 10 . 7/14/2013
Awesome Story .Theseus and Percy,twins,original idea.