Reviews for Pillow Talk
devufairy chapter 1 . 2/16
it was hella hilarious
whitealmond chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
Other than some grammatical and spelling errors... Very funny, adorable, and sweet. Loved it!
Pyrophoricity chapter 1 . 5/10/2015
i laugh... thanks
Lazy chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
Holy shit this is so adorable!
missylynn99 chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
I love it! That was too cute! :)
blassreitter chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
I loved the story very nice
canagg chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
XD I was laughing so hard at the end.
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
This was a bit too normal for him... I expected at least half of LEP marching in or something.
jessi chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
Another great story!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
heehee :) this was hilarious
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Hilarious story, very sweet as well, and the twins are getting up to much mischief.

This gave me a whole bunch of warm fuzzies, thank you for sharing it with us, rather than leaving it to languish on a hard drive somewhere :D
bkaddictjk chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
This was more fun to read than I anticipated :D
BlueBowTies chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
This made me laugh so hard! I LOVE it!
The Dark Strategist chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Well written and humorous. A wonderful combination in writing. This was a well written story and I enjoyed reading it.

As for grammar and spelling, I only spotted minor mistakes that can easily be fixed and most of the readers probably did not notice. The only reason I noticed was because I am a grammar freak.

Peace out, Kingdomwriter34
chocolaat chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
I must say this, but your little short stories make me laugh so much :)

The only critique I have to say is the errors in your grammar and spelling. :P
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