|Reviews for Vendetta|
| Jack Inqu chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Ah, the story I've been looking forward to so much. Not that I don't enjoy your other stories, but I have the feeling I shall enjoy this one especially. I am eager to see what happens when the Arashikages (both born, adopted, and students) stop playing nice and get really mean.
What is it with new students/recruits being sexists? You would think they would do a little research before joining.
At any rate, I look forward to your next update.
| Vierge chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Sex and violence are always a good combination - especially when ninjas are involved. They make both oh so interesting.
I have to agree with Snake Eyes on watching skilled martial artists beat the crap out of others. Moving poetry is a really good way of describing it. Brutal, to be sure, but I think that's part of what makes it poetry: that something so fluid and beautiful can be so completely, utterly deadly.
Oh, and does this take place before or after Clans? If it does come after that story, shall we see Kamakura's "fiancee" make a comeback?
| Frog1 chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
This is going to be interesting, and bloody...who is going to tick them off I wonder? Thank you for writing another ninja clan life/in the future story by the way.
| Totenkinder Madchen chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Oh dear. I have to say I'm definitely looking forward to this-I loved the glimpses we got of ninja family life in "Clans," and I'm afraid I may have squealed a little when I saw this on the update page. And I'm glad I'm not the only one who imagines a pair of twins running Snake and Scarlett ragged. :D
As to the sex and the violence . . . more, please? You write both very well.
| cimorene chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
cool start and now i'm curious, your ninja always seem somewhat easy going, other than the whole laying down the law to keep idiots like this chin fellow from disrespecting anyone, especially the ladies, they never seem really truly angry, looking forward to seeing what sort of idiot manages to piss off the best clan of ninja ever and what they'll do to him
| zenbon zakura chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
| willwrite4fics chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
Violence? In your story? OMG. I'm shocked. Shocked I tell you. I'm not sure I can deal with such shock.
Also.. I feel you on the multiple projects running at once. Same issue over here. Lucky I tied up a few. And started a new one.. lol. Or two.. shh.
Excellant. Looking forward to a more violent chapter.