Reviews for Bella? Marie?
TWILIGHTnmECLIPSEbd911 chapter 11 . 8/23/2010
Loves this story! This is awsome, gr8 plot! :) How long will it b till he finds out about Maire being bella? plz update soon :P
cruelmonth chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
That was Hawt! Bella is all willpower. How did she find the strength to stop? She really does love little Henry.
orion03981 chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
wow! please update soon!
Sweeney Todd's Angel chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
Kept me on edge the whole time! Great job!
caitlexishop chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
That was so incredibly errotic... Is Edward offering up massages like that cause I'm game if he is... I'll give him a massage too. I am really glad that she stopped it though. And I aslo love that he's so attracted to all of her. I can't wait to see how it goes! Thanks so much for the update. :)
Luvtwismut chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
I'm glad Bella stopped him. It only makes the anticipation even better! You did a fabulous job writing the sexual tension between the two. I was on the edge of my seat waiting for their lips to meet!

Bella's past was definitely a shocker. It's so very sad that she may have a murdered mom and a dad who doesn't care about her. I was equally surprised over Irina's connection to Edward. I have a feeling she is going to continue to try to pin her claws into Edward.

I'm so looking forward to the awkward morning. tee hee:)
miki natsuko chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
so close, poor Edward.. i cant wait for the next chapter. update soon
logicn0wfails chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
great update :) update soon
Emz80m chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
I knew it was too good to be true! Edward handled that very badly but I think Bella has no choice now but to spill her guts
reyes139 chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
i almost asked u to marry me until he opened his big mouth and broke her heart what women wants to hear mistake and never happened in same sentence ...uggghhh men i swear ...i hope that maybe bella starts going back to dressing less frumpy and moves forward a little maybe even dates to show him what he is missing ,i understand the concern for henry but we all know he loves bella and she treats him like if he was her own i probably only see rose as a problem maybe with jealousy
xxxxdarkangelxxxx chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
Wow haha that was like 8,000 words of foreplay ;) Don't give 'em the rubbin' they always get horny. Well I'm glad that he's attracted to Bella, good thing she doesn't think with her ovaries too because Edward would feel like shit afterwards.. The always emo brooding Edward beating himself up for fucking up. I'm very interested how the morning after will play out! Awesome job!
NZTwilighter chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
I was a little alarmed at first, hoping it wouldn't go too far to cause more damage... but that doesn't mean I didn't enjoy the UST and more of Edward's realised attraction for Bella. Whew!

I am surprised but impressed that it was B who stopped things, esp knowing how keen she is for Edward - great will power, don't think I would have done the same!
faint-of-hart chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
OMG! gah! im like really kinda dreading when edward knows that Bella is Marie... haha like really dreading it! its gonna make me cry with happyness/sadness cuz i know its not going to end well! bla! so amazing chapter! I really hope you update soon!
Meiki chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
Soooo very good!

You're a tease but it's a delightful sort of torture and your story just keeps getting better and better!
Kynicole chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
wow great chapter
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