Reviews for Bella? Marie?
Luvtwismut chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
I'm glad Bella stopped him. It only makes the anticipation even better! You did a fabulous job writing the sexual tension between the two. I was on the edge of my seat waiting for their lips to meet!

Bella's past was definitely a shocker. It's so very sad that she may have a murdered mom and a dad who doesn't care about her. I was equally surprised over Irina's connection to Edward. I have a feeling she is going to continue to try to pin her claws into Edward.

I'm so looking forward to the awkward morning. tee hee:)
miki natsuko chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
so close, poor Edward.. i cant wait for the next chapter. update soon
logicn0wfails chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
great update :) update soon
Emz80m chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
I knew it was too good to be true! Edward handled that very badly but I think Bella has no choice now but to spill her guts
reyes139 chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
i almost asked u to marry me until he opened his big mouth and broke her heart what women wants to hear mistake and never happened in same sentence ...uggghhh men i swear ...i hope that maybe bella starts going back to dressing less frumpy and moves forward a little maybe even dates to show him what he is missing ,i understand the concern for henry but we all know he loves bella and she treats him like if he was her own i probably only see rose as a problem maybe with jealousy
xxxxdarkangelxxxx chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
Wow haha that was like 8,000 words of foreplay ;) ...men... Don't give 'em the rubbin' they always get horny. Well I'm glad that he's attracted to Bella, good thing she doesn't think with her ovaries too because Edward would feel like shit afterwards.. The always emo brooding Edward beating himself up for fucking up. I'm very interested how the morning after will play out! Awesome job!
NZTwilighter chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
I was a little alarmed at first, hoping it wouldn't go too far to cause more damage... but that doesn't mean I didn't enjoy the UST and more of Edward's realised attraction for Bella. Whew!

I am surprised but impressed that it was B who stopped things, esp knowing how keen she is for Edward - great will power, don't think I would have done the same!
faint-of-hart chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
OMG! gah! im like really kinda dreading when edward knows that Bella is Marie... haha like really dreading it! its gonna make me cry with happyness/sadness cuz i know its not going to end well! bla! so amazing chapter! I really hope you update soon!
Meiki -megthecricketgmail.com chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
Soooo very good!

You're a tease but it's a delightful sort of torture and your story just keeps getting better and better!
Kynicole chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
wow great chapter
trory or rogan chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
MEAN...But I love it,update soon.
Justcurious8 chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
Great chapter. wow It sucks that you left it there, I really wanted to see what Bella thought. lol Damn I dont know if I want Edward to find out about Bella. Would it ruin everything? I can't wait for the next chapter!

~E
Isabela is Online chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
It hurts to see them both have strong feelings for each other but the employer/employee thing just get in the way. It must be excruciatingly hard for Edward to feel erotically hard but couldn't have her.I love how they confide in each other, it makes them trust each other. Bella is all alone,i feel sad for her. also love that Edward didn't think of Marie the whole time, he just noticed that Bella's lips was somewhat familiar.I'm so excited with what you're going to write to make Edward see the beauty of Bella inside and out. Hope Bella and Henry will get to stay longer at Edward' you make Rose extend her vacation for another month?LOL Thank you so much for updating.
hartvixen123 chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
Wow. That massage got pretty heated. I was on the edge of my seat during Edward's POV. I always love getting in his head to see what he's thinking. I didn't think Bella would let it go as far as she did but I was definitely glad. I'm sure she's going to be beating herself up next chapter. I can't wait to find out how they deal with the morning after. LOVE this story!
ITeachArtnTX chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
Wow, I was really feeling that massage, whew!
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