Reviews for Bella? Marie?
pnm chapter 10 . 8/14/2010
Awesome Chapter! Can't wait to read what happens next!
reyes139 chapter 10 . 8/14/2010
you made my night with that chapter that was the best so far it was sweet had so much emotion that i even got a little teary eyed ...cant wait for u to update this story is unbelievable please update soon oh please make the message a steamy one just give us alittle citrus
nikkistew chapter 10 . 8/14/2010
More Edward POV, most definitely. Maybe some Rosalie thrown in, too.
gossip-bangkok chapter 10 . 8/14/2010
I wish he would recognize Bella and Marie as one person soon

Love it

Mmmm. Wonder what's gonna happen next.

Thanks ;)
EmoryB123 chapter 10 . 8/14/2010
Good chapter! I was eager to get a new one!

RE: Bella's cryptic message: I think her "shoes" were Edward, that she wanted to be with him, but she had to acknowledge that she couldn't have him, that she had to "put him back."

Edward watching Bella swim was hot! I am still expecting him to realize B is M - even if it is by their kissing!

The massage will be hot! But I can't wait for the phone call with Maire, either.

Keep up the good work! I would love to have another chapter really soon!
MintCullen17 chapter 10 . 8/14/2010
:DDDDDD ~~~ that's all I need to say!
RoseArcadia chapter 10 . 8/14/2010
Loved it, even the massage cockblock!
Lettersie17 chapter 10 . 8/14/2010
Omg I loved the boyfriend question and answer scene. That was my favorite! I loved that he was such a dork about it, but poor Bella... She's so alone I just want to hug her. No wonder she loves looking after Henry, he probably makes her feel like part of a family again

I also am glad that Edward is seeing more of Bella now! I cannot waiiiiiit for the next chapter! It's going to be sooooo good ;)
HMF chapter 10 . 8/14/2010
I'm glad Edward likes Bella now! I hope the majority of that is not because of her body and more of him liking her as a person. I can not wait till she gives him a massage! I hope she doesn't back out or he doesn't back out of it :)
Charmed Vampire Girl chapter 10 . 8/14/2010
good chapter as usual. chapter 10 . 8/14/2010
I really feel for Bella. I know what its like to "try" something (someone) out and feel so much about it, when I know I can't have it. My heart clenches for her.

And Edward has this war in his brain with morals and what is best for him and his son, all the while grieving for Cynthia. I'm hoping you'll go into the separation and divorce of Rose/Edward.

Looking forward to chapter 11

ADADancer chapter 10 . 8/14/2010
I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
lindsay023 chapter 10 . 8/14/2010
i hope some hot massaging is coming up next of the bodies sexual appendages. edward pervin was awesome wonder when he is going to figure out bella is marie. brillant chapter btw
lovelywendy chapter 10 . 8/14/2010

nvcullen chapter 10 . 8/14/2010
loving it

best story i've read

update soon
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