Reviews for Bella? Marie?
Nik2010 chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
I vote for Edward to ask the boyfrind question. Can't wait for the next chapter.
prettykittyartist chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
great chapter. I am really enjoying your story.
EmoryB123 chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
THANK YOU for this update! I was eager to see what happened with them next.

Edward's "workshop" was too funny! It is really his MAN CAVE!

Edward should def ask Bella more about how she knows about car restoration.

The Koi fish are interesting. I had not heard that different fish represent different family members.

He could ask her the boyfriend question, but he would try to be subtle. Like he might ask her what she likes to do when not working, and he could work in there does she do those thing with her boyfriend? Then she would have to spill whether she has one or not.

I look forward to Edward's talk with Marie on Sunday!. I can't imagine that Bella would risk appearing to him again as Marie.

Poor Little Cynthia! I remember she was mentioned earlier, but I don't remember if more of the story was told. I see that there are more details to the story, and I hope that they come out soon. Does he blame Rose for Cynthia's death? Does he think if she had been less active or whatever that Cynthia would be alive? - "Then again, I'd given Bella the brief, edited version of what had happened. It was the finer details that made my blood boil."

Good Job! Please update again soon!
bellamarie1976 chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
wow what a story. Cynthia's death, I am confused about what happened although I am glad that Edward felt comfortable sharing that with Bella and I love the fact that Edward bought the Koi fish and has a garden in Cynthia's memory, I think Edward should ask Bella if she has a boyfriend that will just add more to the story, and as for Edward starting to call Bella a woman I just think he is starting to see her for who she is, I think that this is a great story.
Linksheart chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
AWWW! This was such a sweet chapter! and hehehehe I'm so glad Edward is seeing her as a woman. When it came to Cynthia I nearly cried. My sister lost a baby not even a year ago. My sisters baby was also a girl, her name was Olvia. We don't know why she died. She just did. It hit me very hard because my birthday was Olvia's due date. So Cynthia's death was especially sad to me. I cant wait for the next chapter! Keep up the marvelous work!
kymtwilight chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
I so loved the way he is seeing her! I hope their pass does not hurt them!
TaintedSunshine chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
aaaaah thats so cute

he likes bella for who she is

i wonder how he'll react when he puts two and two together :P

i hope he doesnt hate bella

that would be sad

but i dont want him to find out soon tho

i like how he wants to know more about bella

keep up the great work

im always excited to read your story :):)
Accsmom chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
nice to see the shift in e/b's relationship... and he didn't obsess or think about Marie once in this chapter.. even when bella was dancing in the kitchen.. big step
teambellaedward chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
that was cool :)
fleur de lisa chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
The more I read this story, the more I become captivated by it. I love the slow, deepening relationship/friendship that Bella and Edward are cultivating. And I cannot wait to see what happens when/if Marie calls him!
ShopGirl525 chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
I LOVE this story! OMG, please let Marie call him and tell him that it isn't going to work...I don't want "Marie" to get in the way of Edward learning about Bella! I'm anxious to hear why Edward is so "mad" about the time and/or details around Cynthia's death. I wish there was more time between when Rose and Edward separated/divorced, I don't want it to see like he's rebounding - but that could be me? Rose and Emmett going to end up together - all one big happy family! YES, Edward should ask about a boyfriend! And Bella, should ask if he's seeing anyone too...

Can't wait for the next update!
amorpsyche chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
"It was the finer details that made my blood boil." .. at some point, we are going to find out about those, aren't we?

I loved the symbolism of the koi fish. And that Edward's starting to see Bella as more than a sex-neutral nanny. I say: Let him ask the boyfriend question :D
Sparrow's Lassie chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
That's so sad! It was good that Edward talked about Cynthia and of course Bella was saddened by the news. NICE that Edward is taken with Bella and not a mention of Marie this time. Coooool! Touching chapter, Nyomi! *hugs* Great writing!

xxxxdarkangelxxxx chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
That was a quick update! Cynthias death is so heartbreaking losing a child is the hardest thing there is. Seems like Edward is looking past Bella's bland exterior.. He's starting to liiiike her! Heheh ;) how come she never takes her glasses off? People look different without glasses maybe Bella should walk around without them for a bit so Edward gets reminded of Marie.. He should definetily ask about the bf thing.. Update soon! :D
Anadabyel chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
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