Reviews for Bella? Marie?
kymtwilight chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
I so loved the way he is seeing her! I hope their pass does not hurt them!
TaintedSunshine chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
aaaaah thats so cute

he likes bella for who she is

i wonder how he'll react when he puts two and two together :P

i hope he doesnt hate bella

that would be sad

but i dont want him to find out soon tho

i like how he wants to know more about bella

keep up the great work

im always excited to read your story :):)
Accsmom chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
nice to see the shift in e/b's relationship... and he didn't obsess or think about Marie once in this chapter.. even when bella was dancing in the kitchen.. big step
teambellaedward chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
that was cool :)
fleur de lisa chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
The more I read this story, the more I become captivated by it. I love the slow, deepening relationship/friendship that Bella and Edward are cultivating. And I cannot wait to see what happens when/if Marie calls him!
ShopGirl525 chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
I LOVE this story! OMG, please let Marie call him and tell him that it isn't going to work...I don't want "Marie" to get in the way of Edward learning about Bella! I'm anxious to hear why Edward is so "mad" about the time and/or details around Cynthia's death. I wish there was more time between when Rose and Edward separated/divorced, I don't want it to see like he's rebounding - but that could be me? Rose and Emmett going to end up together - all one big happy family! YES, Edward should ask about a boyfriend! And Bella, should ask if he's seeing anyone too...

Can't wait for the next update!
amorpsyche chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
"It was the finer details that made my blood boil." .. at some point, we are going to find out about those, aren't we?

I loved the symbolism of the koi fish. And that Edward's starting to see Bella as more than a sex-neutral nanny. I say: Let him ask the boyfriend question :D
Sparrow's Lassie chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
That's so sad! It was good that Edward talked about Cynthia and of course Bella was saddened by the news. NICE that Edward is taken with Bella and not a mention of Marie this time. Coooool! Touching chapter, Nyomi! *hugs* Great writing!

xxxxdarkangelxxxx chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
That was a quick update! Cynthias death is so heartbreaking losing a child is the hardest thing there is. Seems like Edward is looking past Bella's bland exterior.. He's starting to liiiike her! Heheh ;) how come she never takes her glasses off? People look different without glasses maybe Bella should walk around without them for a bit so Edward gets reminded of Marie.. He should definetily ask about the bf thing.. Update soon! :D
Anadabyel chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
LoveBites.ButIBiteHarder chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
Poor Cynthia! & poor Edward! It breaks my heart. But he's super sweet about it! I think it would be awesome for Edward to ask if she has a boyfriend. I want to see Bella's reaction to that!

This story is super awesome. Thanks so much for writing it! You truly have a gift. Anyways, update soon!
racheygirl chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
aww... he likes her, for her personality and not just for her looks... sweet... loved it, keep going!

GorGirl chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
I hope he asks her if she has a boyfriend. I love how he's getting so comfortable with her.
crackupmonkey chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
totally he should ask her but in a sly way like seeing if she needs a night off or something.
deleepowman chapter 9 . 8/7/2010
I loved how this chapter was written. It flowed naturally and Bella/Edward's interaction seems realistic and true to life. Their conversations are becoming so commonplace now and the ease of how they are relating to one another is evident in that Edward shared with Bella Cynthia's history and the symbolism of the garden and the three fish. Edward is thinking of Bella as a "woman" now and not just a girl and is reluctantly allowing himself to feel drawn to her in a physical nature as well. I bet if he saw her in a bikini that would accelerate some. I wish he would fall for Bella before finding out she is Marie. Looking forward to the phone call.
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