|Reviews for Don t do this, Bill|
| Scooter Dracon chapter 1 . 4/25
AAAAAWW CUTE! A lot of grammar errors, though. Good story! :)
| wienerlud chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
That was beautiful. A rollercoaster from start to finish. Bill x Bianca for life. I want a sequel.
| hippiechick2112 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
other than the grammatical errors, i think you should have expanded on why something like this could have happened. why? the man himself works for nasa and helps people like me understand science better.
i think you should at least put more into the story and beef it up a little. otherwise, it's good.
| Celestial Rainstorm chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Whoa, Bill almost committed the unthinkable! Who knew?