Reviews for Don t do this, Bill
hippiechick2112 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
other than the grammatical errors, i think you should have expanded on why something like this could have happened. why? the man himself works for nasa and helps people like me understand science better.

i think you should at least put more into the story and beef it up a little. otherwise, it's good.
Celestial Rainstorm chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Whoa, Bill almost committed the unthinkable! Who knew?