Reviews for Lion in the Desert
laniDG11 chapter 30 . 4/15
Omg! His confession was so heartwarming ! Aw I love it !
KillerCupcakes chapter 30 . 4/2
koodori-mayonaka-hana chapter 30 . 1/23
Omg! I'm ever so sorry with my lack of response to your absolutely awesome writing, I've been going through a break up and tbh its made my life a little hellish i must admit but your story has lifted my spirits once again! Thank you soon much and omg gaara said he loved her I seriously wasn't expecting that from the last chapter! Gosh I have a feeling that she'll reject him but I hope he doesn't! Thats the hopeless romantic talking there anyways I quit jibber jabbering! Can't wait for my next dose! Until next time!
Tamani chapter 30 . 1/23
gah gah gah gah gah gah gah.
I now know what you meant when you said this was a hard chapter to write.
I have no idea how kohaku will answer. I think though, with her new changes will try to be honest which will end up with her saying she doesn't know what love is or how to recognize it because she was taught it was unnecessary to feel anything or else you would be killed. But I can also see her telling him about how she has physiological reactions to gaara's presence such as sweaty palms, a hyperactive stomach that gets in knots, and a temporary lack of cognitive functioning. Of course, she will tell him that although she doesn't know what the symptoms mean (which is so obvious to gaara and everyone else - EVEN NARUTO) though she hypothesizes that she caught some flu or something. Gaara would just make this chocked laughing noise but in the end kohaku would say that should would most love to stay in a place that reminds her of home with probably the most important person she has known in her life.

MAN though. But if that all does go down, and as she has already lied to those in root about her capture I am hoping that she will completely just exempt root and just get rid of it although. Of course she should also notify gaara that should she stay there would probably be assassins that will come for her and understands if gaara doesn't want to put anyone in danger. But that will likely (hopefully if gaara is actually thinking at this moment) get gaara to connect that with if she left then she would probably die (because he really doubts it is hokage-hime to send those assassins).
Tamani chapter 29 . 1/9
Great way to end off the week! So happy though that she played it the way she did. Just wondering how she is going to get out of that one now. As in, if she will unintentionally bring in team kakashi and the sand siblings or if she will do it herself. Though I am picturing team kaksahi and the sand siblings all eating dinner together to celebrate their return and then kakashi asking what happened with Fuu. And while naruto rants that she won't tell us and will give us a wordy answer that basically means non of your damn business she just casually says "nothing just starting to remove my roots" and then everyone gets it but naruto and he starts ranting how he was right all along believe it!
guest chapter 18 . 12/31/2014
Nice was that white stuff naruto wanted to see in the earlier chapers
koodori-mayonaka-hana chapter 28 . 12/31/2014
Awwwwww how cute is Gaara in this latest chapter! He's finally getting to grip with his feelings! And kohaku's coming out of her vocabulary shell! But ooo whats gonna happen now Fuu-Senpai sent by obviously by danzo has appeared, were celebrations of her return too soon? Can't wait for the next one! Always loving your story! Till next time!
Tamani chapter 28 . 12/29/2014
naruto is infinitely a cockblock. Forever more. loved it though. I wish that gaara and kohaku actually got to talk more - though I did like that he actually observed the differences of what he saw in her body language and mannerisms.
534667lc chapter 27 . 12/27/2014
Love your story now following! . Pleae uodate soon!
Tamani chapter 27 . 12/18/2014
Wonderful! I just really want her to realize all of itachi's clue. And I can pin kohaku as being more the shadow badass. Not really liking the limelight, I can see her taking down root from the inside out, and having it all shut down without anyone ever knowing. Then when they eventually find out that root has been shut down and it was all thanks to this teenage girl the respect for her is just going to skyrocket. I really hope that the mission with sasori and deidara isn't for gaara's please don't do that to me. And while I feel that she has analyzed her feelings with the last two things itachi has said to her I think that it will take her week's travel back to sand to understand what happened. I just and loving it so much and cannot wait to see how gaara reacts to her being back!

and that omake of her trolling sasuke is my new headcannon. It WILL happen. One day!
koodori-mayonaka-hana chapter 27 . 12/17/2014
Hallelujah! They found found her! The utter surprise on her face, I could picture it soo well my mind! Will she come with them though? She hasn't completed the mission Danzo had given her... Itatchi is going to let her just walk away. Omg I really do love reading this! I await patiently for the next chapter! It just keeps getting better and better! Ciao for now! Update soon! this is the utmost highlight to my week :D xxxx
Guest chapter 26 . 12/4/2014
I love this sooo me so happy to read and u have such a wonderful writing talent.
koodori-mayonaka-hana chapter 26 . 12/4/2014
Omg they're gonna go find kohaku! Yay :') I say we beat Sai... But first! Save her gaara! Lol Now I'm SUPER excited for the next chapter! Hope to read it soon, keep writing! Xxxx
Tamani chapter 26 . 12/3/2014
dun dun dun dun! I love it! Sai is being questioned and kohaku is being saved! Though I really don't think that she will be the same person whatsoever when she is saved. I am thinking that by the time they rescue her (imagining that it will take at least a week) then she will have figured out all of her thoughts and will seem like a different person. But she will tell them that she is never allowed to come back. Danzo will kill her because she has betrayed the faction, so she may as well stay out here. I would love to see what goes down (though I am still rooting for the "she finds out about the uchiha massacre and just teases sasuke on her adventures across the hidden villages" - but that's just me; but actually - omake? :D)
alemery chapter 25 . 11/28/2014
What an asshole.
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