Reviews for Broken
Blue Kangaroo chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Wow. Just...wow. This is a wonderful story. The descriptions are amazingly vivid and so well-written! I honestly can't say enough good about this. It's beautiful!

I'm looking forward to more from you!
alittlethingcalledhope chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Wow, interesting setting for a story like this :) I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing : )
Lara Cox chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Hi! I really liked your story. Happy easter! I'm a Methodist, by the way. But I imagined Renee as a Catholic in my story. I don't really know why. There was something about her that made me feel it made more sense to write her as a Catholic.

anyway, keep up your good work

Lara
Dots is too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Wow. This is great. Never actually seen 24, but who needs plot with stuff like this? Very moving. Loved it.

Now if only we could find a church that isn't Saddleback... or Mormon. X_X