Reviews for The battle for Raphael
LivingForTv chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
Whoa! Intense! And I do so like Gordon:-) Not to mention how much I like this Limael. You are a master at descriptions of warriors and I'm anxious to know more about this gang of motorcyklists. Who is Zacharia thinking of calling?

I loved these sentences:

"staring as if the house were a cake with a stripper about to pop out of the top."

"and his fellow angels were holed up like Davy Crockett and company in the Alamo"

"We have God on our side. What do they have? Lucifer?"

"His bare skin the color of coffee with two cremes steamed as the rain down his thick arms and shoulders."

Keep going, please!
Realhuntress chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
AACK! Chapter 2! Quick! Can't leave us hanging like that!

Zach - disliked him before, even more so now! Texting while a GIRL does his dirty work? tsktsk.