Ahsoka ain't dead. She was part of the rebellion until she duelled Vader, and is probably still stuck on malachor

This was an awesome story, im glad i read it. Despite some misspelled and missplaced words, you did an awesome job. Keep it up

Oh yes, this story will be fun to read.

The grave/hive mind in halo two

I love this story 10/10

I love the story and fuck anyone who was hammering you about chief

The sith trance was nice but I it would have been better if her rage made her refuse to die like on one the sith in the expanded universe but it still made sense considering she is a nights is terrible 10/10 so far

Yeah I'm gonna love this time for no life reading mode

Misspelled some words anyways u did great

Your story is great and so far shows a love for world building through action rather than exposition which I honestly like. However there is a thing that has been grinding on my nerves this whole chapter.
It is REALLY jarring when you jump from one perspective to another like this. I can not keep track of who is where and it interrupts the flow of the story. One plot line at a time, finish it then move on to the next. I hope this improves as I read on as I fully intend to do so.

that was a good chapter. got a bit emotional at the end good job

Brilliant writing, honestly. My friends all thought I was mad when a few days ago I said I was reading a "halo Star Wars crossover". I almost expected it to be horrible, but you shattered my expectations. Well done, vary well done.

While I do like the sword idea, wouldn't it be better for the Spartans to have a double edge sword?

I love this story. This is the only story on this site that I have read more then twice. this is my third time reading it.

Aren't you going to do a prequel to the story telling the story before the Allied Species entered the Clone Wars?